Reviews for Beautiful
Valerie Phoenixfire chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
Hm...what to say about this.

It's cute, I'll give you that, but I'm assuming that it takes place way back in Loboto's life, since it would be very much...not in character if relying on the actual Psychonauts timeline. If it's a past thing, then it's quite cute, if still somewhat out of character.
xvjafhafg.a chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
Oh-me-oh-my, It was short, it was random, and it was unique. I don't think I've seen any other Loboto romances before, so i give you a cyber high-five. I dont know why, but that last line was just morbidly funny, I loved it!

"With that, he walked out of the subway and decided live his pathetic and depressing life."

(HAHAHAHA...shutting up, it shouldn't be funny...)
FluffleNeCharka chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
Wow, random yet cool and original. Rock on!