Reviews for Fighting With Desire
playstation14 chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
It's Mr and Mrs Whore!

lol just kidding, you know I would never flame you!

I'll just ignore the fact that Knuckles doesn't even HAVE a you-know-what...well, I guess if he does have one, they can't show it in the games anyway cause then all Sonic games would have to be rated M xD
CitizenSoldier chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
I usually prefer Shadow and Rouge, but this was very well written. Kudos to you.
KittyNakajimaX chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
This, for a first time hentai writer, was beautiful. Particularly for a one shot lemon. You managed to convey and show emotions that a lot of people have trouble re-creating in these type of things (in particularly, Rouge's feminine lust of Knuckles).

Given that I am a big Rouge fan, I think this story showed off an aspect of her personality and manner that we'd only get to see if Sonic Team and SEGA ever opted out to make an Mature rated game in the future.

You also managed to peg down Knuckles pretty well, and even a character that most know little about (Fang the Sniper).

Congratulations on a job well done and keep up the wonderful work.
Rougerluz chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
good story I liked it alot_*favs*
Iced-Out-Snowman chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
I'm aways short on the reviews: Good, simple, and not overly descriptive; just the right amount.

Wish you luck on your other stories

N' I'm out peace
Kal0-and-Summer chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
Summer: Star... I gotta tell ya I luv ya for this one!

Kal0: Favies you fool!

Summer: Ya! Luv ya!

Kal0: knuxougie goodness! Ek exciting


Kal0 and Summer
P chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
please write it was so good.
lugia flyhight chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
wow, i liked it, is it a one shot or will there be more? please let there be more like that between those ! good though i liked it.
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