Reviews for Dirty Sunshine
Arkan9 chapter 9 . 6/27/2006
Oh, it's all so awful! But at least there's hope...there IS hope, right? Please tell me there's hope!

Argh, please write more soon!
WLiiAfanatic chapter 9 . 6/27/2006
Stop making me cry! My glasses are getting too smudgy! P

Anyway, this was wonderfully written (as was the last chapter. Sorry I skipped the review on that one). I really did feel Wanda's pain, almost as much as I felt Cosmo's confusion.

And, YAY! Finally, someone knows the plan!

This is reminding me of that night that the power went out right in the middle of the big fight scene in Spider Man. I need to know what's going to happen!
CaryFairy chapter 9 . 6/26/2006
whoa. shit hits fan in 3... 2... 1...
lunatroid chapter 9 . 6/26/2006
Oh, the plot thickens! Now Cosmo knows the truth! The next chapter should be real interesting! Great stuff as usual! Thanks for the great read!
toxic-dreamer-2 chapter 8 . 6/24/2006
OH NO! Things are going so bad...I hope someone can talk some sense into them...someone who isn't part of an evil plot to destroy their marriage. It's sad really...

Good story...keep going
Arkan9 chapter 1 . 6/18/2006
I really love this story... Oh, the angst!

Your two styles mix so well that I wouldn't know who wrote which chapters if you didn't tell me. All the characters are in character, too, and you get all the points across while still keeping it simple, which suits the story.

Good job! Please write more soon!
CaryFairy chapter 7 . 6/3/2006
the heartbreak is killing me! man would make a pretty good songfic chappie don't you think?
Band8PGeek chapter 7 . 6/3/2006
*twitches, tries to keep oneself from crying*

Aw...

*fails, cries*
WLiiAfanatic chapter 7 . 6/3/2006
Augh! Too much sadness!

But it's too good to stop reading. I need to see what happens next! I can only hope future updates will come this quickly.
lunatroid chapter 6 . 6/1/2006
Oh, I'm liking this chapter. Wanda's with a better man IMO. Feel sorry for Cosmo? Not me. In the episode "Apartnership" he was smart enough and brave enough to tell off his mother and defend his wife. In this story he's stupid AND spineless. Unless he snaps out of it he deserves to lose the best thing that ever happened to him. A good read as always! Thanks!
WLiiAfanatic chapter 6 . 6/1/2006
Before I started to read this, I had "Another Horsedreamer's Blues" by Counting Crows playing on iTunes. Now, normally I don't listen to music when I'm reading something, but this song worked SO well with the story! I'm trying so hard not to cry right now!

As usual, this chapter was wonderfully written. I really felt for Cosmo this time around-a bit more than I did for Wanda, I have to admit. But seeing her through Timmy's eyes...

I don't know who I feel sorriest for!

I waited this long for an update, so I know I can wait forever for the next installment if it's going to play out this well (and it's nearly impossible that it won't!).
CaryFairy chapter 6 . 6/1/2006
double u tee eff mate? why is juandissimo there? thats just wrong. and when ISNT cosmo confused? although i must say i feel bad for the poor guy
Lil Cosmo chapter 5 . 4/13/2006
Aw . . . way to almost make me start crying . . . damn, too late.
Lil Cosmo chapter 4 . 4/13/2006
GASP!
CaryFairy chapter 5 . 4/9/2006
*falls over* so much angst! keep it coming
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