bruh it was good was good then naruto forgave everyone for betraying him. dont waste your time reading this. trash fic

That's dumb I thought this was a bashing story How the hell is There bashing in The story if If he goes kumbaya, let's all be friends, That's just dumb

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"One chapter shouldn't make or break a story". ? One conversation shouldn't break 6 years worth of resolve either but you did that so why shouldn't your one chapter break your story? Your entire premise is now gone, the flashbacks and name dropping of random OCs doesn't add nearly enough to this story as you think it does when you completely destroy the premise that led Naruto to those people and interactions in the first place.

This story is a waste of time. Forgiveness is always an option, but it has to be earned through time and actions, not by two words.

Lol 5 chapters in and the premise is already useless. Fucking unreal writing.

Actually the whole Nara clan knows this jutsu. And Naruto would personally know two of them:
-shikaku
-shikamaru

Зачем ты сделал его снова тупым, в самом начале намного лучше, теперь он опять как раньше стал зачем это. Он должен был ненавидеть лист и всех кто там живёт

Наруто не шиноби конохи он мог спокойно отрубить руки сакре за нападение на него где это а?

Узумаки повёлся как обсос пошёл извинятся и с какой стати он должен был все что он сказал было правдой. Какаши мудак сакура шлюха обычная учиха мстительный сосунок. Вся деревня его гнобила издевалась предала обокрал и он их прощает тупо слив фанфика в унитаз.

Во первых раз ты дура розоволосая любила учиху чеж ты сама за ним не пошла. Так же Джирая и цунаде 2 бесхребетный мудака они могли сказать, что сын минато. А также они не сказали это наруто и не отдали все сто принадлежалоиего родилям а наверное себе забрали.

If I wrote the story I would've given more details about Naruto's training over the six years and of course Jiraiya still dies to pain, also Obito, Black zetsu and Known are still alive. Pain gets defeated by Itachi.

don't expect naruhina pairing here, it's complete bashing fic

its already whacky enough im almost want to quit, However, the premise and their interaction are quite fascinating. Too bad the author skimp too quickly on the juicy portions.

Why did you make Tsunade have a kid at 13? This story is just getting worse the more I read

There's so many oc's in this that don't even need to be there. You made half of the Akatsuki OCs despite the fact that all their names are revealed when you made this story since kushina and Minato are name-dropped AFTER all the Akatsuki are. The story is somewhat unique but the writing is painfully generic, standard uchiha-sama dobe yada yada. That is to say I don't see this story being good from what I've read so far but I'll read a bit more