|Reviews for The Golden Fox|
| Gold Testament chapter 5 . 1/16
Sasuke, Hanabi, and possibly Sakura will wreck the mission.
| Anime Geek chapter 42 . 1/15
I loved it! Awesome job! This is now my favorite fic! :D
| outta fucks to give chapter 11 . 1/12
its really bothering me that you spelled mizukage with a 's' instead of a 'z' idk why tho...
| outta fucks to give chapter 3 . 1/11
*PLOT HOLE* THERE IS NO WAY FOR SHIKIMARU TO KNOW THE NAMES OFNYHE BIJUU
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/13/2017
You should change the title to "Lapdog of Konoha" because that is what he is at this moment. But again Naruto is an attention whore so he will forgive everyone so long as he is acknowledged or whatever, yeah.
| mckertis chapter 4 . 12/9/2017
The grammar...it hurts...
| WitchL0v3r chapter 3 . 11/29/2017
it's interesting to read this thinking about all the reveals the manga has put forth since then.
| TheOmnificentOne chapter 1 . 11/20/2017
How in the hell did you mess up Kushina so much? Her appearance is shown in the manga..
| demon66 chapter 6 . 11/18/2017
I love this story
| Raven DK chapter 5 . 10/11/2017
Okay.. I don't usually diss fics. But this fic is annoying me beyond measure. Even considering the fact it was written before Naruto even became a sage. Jiraiya forgiving every other person for what they did to Naruto as if he doesn't deserve a say on who to forgive. Jiraiya manipulating events to train Naruto. It's almost like Jiraiya is a puppet master and Naruto isn't allowed any free will or choices. Even if he is being trained it's almost like he is being made the perfect weapon with attachment to a select few people. Further if Konoha wanted Naruto for free all they had to do was kidnap one of the 2 civillians. And he'd have to cooperate or risk losing them. Tsunade's plan was so stupid that it would've been better if she'd sent him on a 3 year long term assignment to wave and it would have had the same effect that the banishment did. Seriously that excuse is beyond pathetic and even then Jiraiya forgives her. Yumi's anger in front of and for people she doesn't even know despite being Naruto's fiancé instead of doing it in private is equally crappy. I'm sorry for doing this. But despite your high number of favs and reviews (which you probably got because the fic was then revolutionary) in terms of writing and plot I find it highly disappointing and cringeworthy.
| mr. jack joke chapter 4 . 9/22/2017
poor shikamaru... having to deal with women always nagging him for some reason...
| Nssheepster chapter 5 . 9/13/2017
...Seriously? They don't deserve an apology. Forgiveness is earned, not given, and his old teammates didn't do anything to deserve it. Putting the past behind you doesn't mean forgiving or forgetting, just not dwelling on it. He said his piece, he had every right to do so... And then Jiraya gave him bad advice and the story died.
| aslan333 chapter 42 . 9/12/2017
| Guest chapter 31 . 9/12/2017
Too many new characters without proper intro and Naruto is kinda lame...
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/25/2017
You build so much hate and resentment for the village, and then throw it away with some words from Jiraiya? That was so anticlimactic and gave off a sense that everything that happened was insignificant.