Reviews for The Golden Fox
Jofiction chapter 4 . 10/10/2016
Overuse of exclamation marks. Kinda made me cringe at the all caps and overabundance of exclamation marks. I mean i get theyre yelling, but goddamn chilll
lewmax82 chapter 5 . 9/26/2016
Hey thanks for writing this story. Although I'm late, i think naruto forgave them too quickly. All that hate just doesnt just disappear like that for him to move on so easily. That just makes this story a sissy one for me because the way the characters interacted was too scripted
itachi naruto chapter 6 . 8/26/2016
nyc one up till fi8 of naruto n sasuke n like last lines...
silentfan9 chapter 9 . 8/24/2016
to be quite honest i thought you were going to say that the phoenix was a sign of some very large battle or something
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2016
Just a small thing that I found hilarious. When you replaced "Arashi" with "Minato" when the fourths name was revealed I assume you used the replace function in your word processor. Well in chapter three, one MitARASHI Anko had her name replaced and now it says MitMinato Anko and I saw that and couldn't stop laughing
my 2 guys chapter 3 . 7/20/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 2 . 7/19/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 7/19/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
Lerris chapter 42 . 7/4/2016
I skipped to the end. It seemed to have too many DBZ like moments towards the end. One that stood out was that for some strange reason Naruto could only teleport really close to a Kunai. It seemed you needed to artificially limit the results from his training just to drag the fight out. Seriously, the 4th had an SS rating. Naruto, from all accounts was stronger than the fourth and then you just kept adding on to his powers. He killed hundreds of shinobi before the story started and he didn't have Hiraishin then, but was somehow killing a comparable number of enemies.

Overall the story was good. Just be cautious of the dragonball z style advancement. Also, why have the civilians cheering for Naruto's death at the end? It is more typical for at that point of the story to be winning over more than a few hearts and minds...
Lerris chapter 36 . 7/4/2016
The biggest things that stand out are the one strong person in a cage for most of the fight, and, well, rather than sasuke and naruto teaming up to finish this quickly, sasuke did a task others could have done. Admittedly I'm not a huge fan of Sasuke, but this one was developed well. It just doesn't make sense to fight the bad guy one on one, if it can be avoided. Another thing that sort of stood out is the dbz style, but he just leveled up yet again and again and again. Still, overall this is entertaining.
Rogue Survivor chapter 7 . 7/3/2016
My favorite part? An older man and professional swordsman feels the need to point out that he's not homosexual after saying Naruto was handsome.
Rogue Survivor chapter 2 . 7/3/2016
Naruto seeing Ayame and Teuchi for the first time in years? That needed to be a fair bit more dramatic.
Rogue Survivor chapter 2 . 7/3/2016
I think the training trip would have been a more interesting story... Care to write a prequel?
kindasortastantheman chapter 6 . 6/28/2016
I wanted to like this, and in a way I guess I do. I'm just not really one for soppy stories of friendship and forgiveness. It still seems like it would be a good read, just not for me.
Guest chapter 22 . 6/21/2016
This is a very awesome story, I really lovved it... I just wish It was a naruhina story...
Man I'm so depressed...
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