Reviews for Seven Sins Of The Makai
PlutoAn chapter 3 . 4/19/2006
wow good story! Please update soon! x
llppoo33 chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
wow, this is a great story, please update if you can! :)
Mikaji chapter 3 . 3/27/2006
I am like SO...MAD! HOW DARE THAT ARI CALL ZEON 'ZE-ZE'! LET ME AT HER! LET ME AT HER!

-slaps self back into soberness-

Ok. Sorry about that. I just get so touchy! It was a very good chappy! Koruru is better when she's more mature _ or at least I think so... Well update soon!
Twilight Memories chapter 3 . 3/26/2006
I always thought Baltro looked like a polar bear...

Anywho, heheheh... poor Zeon. He just doesn't know about the Seven Sins...

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Well... Can't really blame him. I dunno 'bout them either. Heehee!

Hm? How many of Zatch's friends are there? 'Cause Ari said only seven could go through the gate... So let's see... (counting) There's Patie, Kolulu, Tia, Hyde, Ari, Baltro, and... Is Kanchome there? Eh...

Update when ya can.
Mikaji chapter 2 . 3/22/2006
You don't need to apologize! It's ok if they're similar in a few ways! I think it's kinda cool that someone could come up with an idea so similar to mine! No... It IS cool!
Twilight Memories chapter 2 . 3/22/2006
"This was definately not the same Goren he wanted to meet. The one he had in mind was an evil, cruel, and merciless demon who ruled with an iron fist. This one was an insane man." HAHAHAHA! That had to be my favorite line out of this entire chapter! XD

And...Democracy? HA! That's rich.

Oh dear... I'm sure Zeon's just sending him so he'll have a chance at being killed, ne? Heh, update when you can!
Emma Iveli chapter 2 . 3/21/2006
This is a pretty good story, I liek that his anestor is jsut Zatch in her eating habits... good story! Please update soon!
Mikaji chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
Wow. I love how you've made Zeon's character so shy like. IT MAKES ME LOVE HIM ALL THE MORE!

I'll keep a lookout to see if your "Seven Sins Of The Makai" are like my "Seven Cursed Demons" Cuz' when I saw your summary I was a little worried! But it's all good
Twilight Memories chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
Wow, this is, uh... Interesting. Zeon as King, eh? Well i must give you the award for being the first to have that happen (not a bad thing!). (throws confetti around) Or at least for any stories I'VE ever read i haven't seen this happen.

It could be just me... But Zeon seems just a tad bit off character when he blushed like that... Never knew he had the capability to do so in front of a bunch of people. ;

._. Goren with an old guy personality...? ._.

Well, anywho, update when ya can!
B is for Backup chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
It is good update soon.