Reviews for Beautiful Intentions
What contented men desire chapter 4 . 3/31/2008
...and lost, than never loved at all. An old proverb, as I recall. A favourite of many. Depending on the direction you take this story, it could definitely be a fine selection.

I have never been very good at keeping my pairings apart for prolonged periods, so I'm not sure how helpful I can be on that front.

The similarities to GoF from Harry's perspective are highly amusing, to any who have read the book enough times to know them all by heart *tugs collar*

Bottom line, you need to decided how you want this to go. The genre says 'romance,' so you should have Fred doing everything possible to win over Ciara (whose name I just noticed is remarkably similar to Cialis). Don't overdo it; Don't hae him trying to get her to go out with him right off the bat, work in baby steps. A few pranks aimed at other people, yet go awry and end up getting her is a good way to build tension.
Bribbie chapter 3 . 8/2/2007
Well Good... Although... Fred took Angelina to the Yule ball where they danced so exuberantly that people backed away for fear of Injury... was include that somehiw will you? and the way he asks her... the way he already decided he was going with her before he asked then just shouted across the room... I rather liked that, it made me laugh... Keep to the Facts and I'll love you... WAIT Also Don't forget the thing with Bagman, and how Ron hung out with them whenhe and Harry weren't talking... lolcan you tell i've read this one a few times... It's my favorite... tied with the Next One OOP... then 7, 6, 3, 1, 2. But i have most of the Fourth book commited to memory...i've read it the most times... anyway I'm bableing stupidly... cuz i'm tried... bye
GossipGirl05 chapter 6 . 10/29/2006
Please don't quit on this. I understand how hard it is to update suff (see mine The New Girl) PLease don't end up like mea nd continue. Good luck with your senior year!
quidditch7 chapter 5 . 9/8/2006
Hey! I'm really sorry to hear that you won't be back to write more this year...but I very much look foward to reading future work posted by you next year. I hope you have an awesome and successful senior year! Good Luck girlie.

lil'rook chapter 4 . 6/30/2006
aww that was cute. But bad Blaise! No he's meant to be nice and stuff. Oh well he's still nice in my head, but evil in your story. Bad Blaise!

Anyway well done. Please update soon. this is really good.
quidditch7 chapter 4 . 6/17/2006
Nice update...the whole rape/getting saved bit was a bit cliche, but still very well written. I love how Fred has cared for Ciara for such a long time. Great chapter, I'm glad you updated :)

quidditch7 chapter 3 . 5/8/2006
Loved it! Fred cracks me up..well both of the twins do! You are a really good writer and I can't wait to read more of this story..I think it's cute that Fred thinks Ciara is pretty.

Can't wait to read more!

BohemianRhapsody1986 chapter 3 . 5/7/2006
This seems like a really interesting read...I can't wait for you to update so I can read more and find out what's going to happen between Ciara and the twins.
quidditch7 chapter 2 . 4/24/2006
Defintely loved this chapter. It was really funny..I love the hate/at some point love relationship going on. The bickering is funny, and I loved hearing about the pranks he pulled on her. The thoughts of the characters are well written too and give us an insight on what's going on in the characters minds. Keep up the brilliant writing. And about your A/N I think it would be cool if you left the sex OUT. haha, I think this story would be much better without it- but snogging's always good haha.

Padfoot'sHeartBelongsToMe chapter 2 . 4/23/2006
Hey! Wow, great update! I hope you post a new chapter soon! I cant wait to read more! Post more soon! Oh, I have a feeling Fred and Ciarra are going to get pretty close...Hehe! Post soon!
quidditch7 chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
Intriguing. This seems really interesting and I can't wait to read more. What couple is this about then..Ciara (made up character right?) and George? Any other characters? One of the twins with any girl always seem to make very interesting, sweet, and funny I look forward to reading more. I like your writing style. Thanks for the review on my story too :)

Padfoot'sHeartBelongsToMe chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
ITS ME! Just got done reading it...Brilliant start! I can not wait to read more! This is going to be interesting since Ciara and Fred dont like each other...I bet they end up together! But anyways...Update soon! I cant wait!