Reviews for Breathless
LuSo chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
Very cool and very in character, i love the Jack and Jacob banter-friendship thing. :)
SG1-Fanfic chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
Great job!
TLWROX chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
As much as I love S/J fluff, this was completely spot- on with the amount of sexual tension that would occur in an episode. Very well done. :) :) :)
Sci Fi Fan Gillian chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
Good story.
Natters chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
evil chuckle. excellent! more please
froggy0319 chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
Enjoyed this and loved Jacob's warning to Jack ;)
janissima chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
Wonderful and highly enjoyable. Loved the banter between Jack and Jacob...I could imagine Jacob responding in just the manner you wrote!
liketoread chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
Enjoyed this story. Loved the interaction between Sam and Jack, as well as that between Jacob and Jack.
macisgate chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
Nicely done! Excellent writing! I was completely sucked into this story. I could totally see this happening on an actual episode and wish it had! Awesome job!
gater62 chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
You've got the characters right on the money!
JamSack chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
That was completely awesome!
Caladria101 chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
Great job!
getcarter chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
Loved it! Great job. Gotta love Jacob's sense of timing!
Ayiana2 chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
Excellent job of characterization. I especially liked Jacob/Selmak's reaction to Jack. It was very well written.