Reviews for The First Daughter
Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
Please write more! Love it
roganjalex chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
awesome update pls
brokenvoice14 chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
love to read what happens next it would be cool to see ian fall for harper...that would be interesting or see harper fall for ian...
michaelflynn'sgirl chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
How come you never finished it

It was a wonderful start, would of liked to be able to read more.
NerdLifeIsAGreatLife chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
OMG!
ariadne.masen chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
I always wanted to read a story about henry having another secret daughter! Great. Alothough you wrote this a long time ago. Plaese continue! Please.
Poemwriter98 chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
I love it! What an amazing plot line. Another daughter. Wow. :) Please continue!
Sweet 15 chapter 1 . 4/14/2008
Hi,

I really like this story.
oheygracey chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
Don't get discouraged by the flames, it happens to the best of us. (Not that is should...) I like the idea, but you might want to seperate different days, and take everything slower. And make it more realistic, I mean who would just say "Goodnight" after she finds out she has a sister? Oh yea, add more emotion.
Gabriella Janeway chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
I loved it please update soon.
LOTRlover1066 chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
That was an interesting little twist. I like this so far. Keep going. I'm enjoying this. But, Daphne and Libby should go with Henry and Ian to meet Harper
The Sway Wannabe chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
This is great please continue it.
Christine Writer chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
i like
rhapsodyflower chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
Well...it's certainly creative...
julzxoxo chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
its happening all to quickly mabe slow it down a bit it would make it more interesting
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