|Reviews for Fated|
| SheWolfMedjai chapter 12 . 3/10/2013
Oh please continue this is priceless stuff!
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/15/2012
question,did u die?ppppwwwaaaeeez update!T-T
| sirwayde chapter 12 . 9/10/2009
Wow!Im enjoying this story very though its kind of off to a slow start.I do hope you continue to update this story.I'm a big Saitou and Misao fan.
| Ralf Jones chapter 12 . 5/26/2008
| Kay-san chapter 11 . 7/16/2006
Okay, it's been two and a half months since your last update. Where are you? I'm seriously needing more of this story! More I tell you! Anyway, lovin' it, just get more out soon, okay?
| Kay-san chapter 8 . 7/16/2006
Okay, I have some CONSTRUCTIVE comments. These are NOT meant in any way to be taken as a flame, because I absolutely am enjoying your story. Just to help with the flow, instead of having multiple chapters re-writing the same thing to put across different POVs, you could put the two POVs together. For instance, write it in say Misao's POV, then just put in what Saitou is thinking about the situation. It would help your flow and make the story an easier read. Just a suggestion! Still loving it! Hugs & Kisses!
| Kay-san chapter 6 . 7/16/2006
I love it! I usually hate Megumi, but this last chapter has me absolutely adoring her! It's wonderfully written for all the characters, but Megumi has just stolen a special place in my heart. Just thought I'd post that little note. Now on to read the rest of what's up! Hugs & Kisses!
| Miharu Kawashi chapter 11 . 5/14/2006
I like the concept. The only thing I have to comment on is the switching of the Pov. I enjoy the two perspectives, but can get a little annoying reading the scenes all over again. I would stick to one character's discription and add an after thought when switching to another's pov. That's just my suggestion though.
I love the story though and am very amused with the Saito pov. I am not a big fan of his, but I find his thoughts very entertaining. He might be an ass, but his comments are strangely right on. Can't wait for the next update! Ja ne!
| EcstasyOfSesshoumaru chapter 11 . 5/4/2006
Hehe how positively kawaii! _ Update soon please.
| silver-kitsune223 chapter 11 . 5/3/2006
Heehee, this chapter was great. Don't worry about updaing so much. If you try to rush it the story might not turn out so good. So if you need to take your time, take your time. -
| EcstasyOfSesshoumaru chapter 10 . 4/15/2006
MAH! Update! If you don't I will become mean and horrible and...and...AND STEP ON YOUR TOES! Ohohohohohohohohohohoho, what now?
| silver-kitsune223 chapter 10 . 4/15/2006
I liked both of the chapters. I cna't wait to see the sparks fly between Misao an Saitou. -
| EcstasyOfSesshoumaru chapter 8 . 4/8/2006
Hehehehe you know I liked it so just update already!
| silver-kitsune223 chapter 8 . 4/7/2006
Heehee Misao beating the crap out of him... very good job and thank you for updating so soon. -
| DeeKaui chapter 3 . 4/7/2006
lol..i like it!