Reviews for Fluffy Featherbed
Evil Detective chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
That was so cute!
I kinda hope they did it on reality instead of just in a dream...
Go Eirika/L'Archael! :D
silent97 chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Oh man. Goofiness, inuuendo, that silly writing style, and a perfectly placed anti-climaxtic ending?

Most hilarious Eirika/L' Arachel I've read so far.

Great job!
DuchessOfDementia chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
i LIKES IT

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...kudos, sir.
Measured chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
Tee hee, featherbed! Both seemed v. in character, especially little things like L'arachel worrying about the size of her pillows. Poor girls, they should definitely work in tandem to make those dreams of theirs come true ;D
im retired sorry chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
The servant and the suggestive pillows and the ending made it even more awesome than it already was.

I lol'd till I cried, seriously. :'D
Lord Tangent chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
clever use of the door.

as a thought, seeing as yuri is underpopulated worldwide, please write something more straightforward...

nice job tho :D
Roxius chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
Too bad it was all just a dream...

NICE JOB, THOUGH!
The Darklight Angel chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
hahaha! i loved this story! so funny! Too bad about Eirika and L'Arachel though...
Wandering Cat chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
Me and IceBlade28 are on a mission to read some s-ai fics so we can be at peace with those who write them. Hence, this review.

That said, and suggestive humor aside, I have to say I sorta like it. Eirika/L'Arachel isn't a very unreasonable pairing, and I'll admit they work well together, so I could shove that pet peeve aside and enjoy the fic. I do really feel sorry for Eirika and L'Arachel in the end. The fic itself was very funny, the way you word things and the "abso-freaking-lutely" (I thought I was the only one who did that) especially. Good job! Maybe if you'd write another, possibly more clean, shojo or shonen I'd be willing to read, just because I know how good you are.
IceBlade28 chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
I'm really not the biggest fan of shojo-ai, but this was flipping hilarious! You kept it serious while making me (literally) lol at the same time. Well done.
jaimeastorga2000 chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
Your fic, good sire, wins at life with ease and grandiosity.

Hehe, this had me giggling all the way through. I just gotta love the innuendo, and the narrative which breaks from the so traditional just describing action and gives way to such hilarious setences as "(because after a long, hot, intense, loving pillow fight and a conversation full of soft, pillowy innuendo, the one thing that would make a girl really blush is a little gentle touch, right?" Why, in fact, virtually everything which was in parenthesis in your fic had me laughing.

But... aw... it's so sad, they deserved a little kiss... ;-; Go, Erika, travel to Rausten and go make your dream come true!

...ahem, I think the hyperness of the fic is rubbing off on me. XD But your is a truly wonderful work, and I should like seeing more like it.
Shadows of the Fairies chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
"Now, you know this is the perfect scene for a kiss! There is absolutely, positively no doubt that something really, really awesome is going to happen. Indubitably, irrevocably, undeniably, abso-freaking-lutely going to happen! Oh yeah." Loved that.

And the oh-so-perverted servant? Wonderful. :D

The wording itself and the flow? Perfectly done.

And you just have to love that (as you said it yourself) pillowy innuendo.

...I'm sure you can tell I highly enjoyed this. XD
CrossoverQueen chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
Oh, this was absolutely FANTASTIC. I love you for getting me into shojo-ai, because that's what you've just done.

And people keep getting minor injuries; the messenger's hand, Eirika's back, and L'Arachel's head. It's amusing. And the ambiguousity! *glomps*
Renn chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
Aww! You're so mean! Poor girls... XP...lol!
Ormiss chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
I need to listen to crazy upbeat J-Pop in order to get into the proper mood to review this. Hyperactive asian girl, made of sugar in a factory, screaming occasional words in a language her people cannot even begin to pronounce correctly. Thank god I don't know Japanese, or I'd understand what they're singing.

Anyway. I want you to smile when I tell you that this is -insane-. Did you have fun while writing this? I think you did; I can imagine you grinning and cackling as you type away, describing the fluffiness of... fluff. What can I say? I don't know. Your enthusiasm spreads through your writing. This is what "random mode" looks like when a skillful writer is at the keyboard.

Eirika, L'Arachel, fluffy featherbed. A setting clinically freed from all hard, pointy objects, leaving only soft, silky matter.
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