|Reviews for Ultimate SpiderMan First Genesis|
| SpiderFan1991 chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
You're a great writer, it's very beleiveable. But you don't make it into something your own. You took word for word quotes from the first Spider-Man movie and put them in novel form. I don't know if you are done with the series, but try to come up with your own story arcs. You know, change it up. Have a different villian than Doc Ock and The Green Goblin as the first major fight for Spidey. Find a creative new way to tell the story of how Pete came to be the Web-Slinger. It will definitely make your stories richer. Your writing style is phenomonal, but you replay too much of what has already been done.
| Radio Driver chapter 5 . 9/16/2008
Good goin, Mimick. Keep on keepin on.
| Sir Thames chapter 33 . 7/19/2008
Loved the Batman movie parody at the end. Spot on.
| PadawanCassy chapter 32 . 4/4/2008
I really enjoy your story and can't wait for please post an up-date soon and keep up the wonderful work.
| J the Drafter chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
The idea behind this fanfic looks really imaginative and a different look at the Ultimate Spider-Man mythos sounds fascinating. However, it is seriously harmed by a disjointed narrative and a lack of three-dimensional characters. This story needs significant editing to fix these flaws.
| Sir Thames chapter 31 . 11/26/2007
This last chapter is very interesting. Can't wait for the next. Spot on.
| Shimo Ino chapter 29 . 9/25/2007
Nice! Very nice! Hope to see more great chapters!
| Valdemar chapter 28 . 7/31/2007
Great fic, plenty (so plenty!) of supporting charas from Spidey's universe and a good story and interactions among them.
Keep up your awesome work. Bye!
| Sir Thames chapter 27 . 7/2/2007
Interesting ending on this chapter. Spot on.
| Sir Thames chapter 26 . 5/21/2007
The gang fight and Kingpin's participation in this was good.
| reviewer not a writer chapter 25 . 4/11/2007
| CoyoteWolf chapter 25 . 4/8/2007
poor Spidey just can't catch a break...
| Alfradio chapter 2 . 2/18/2007
DUN DUN DUH!
| Alfradio chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
| Sir Thames chapter 24 . 2/14/2007
like the relationship with daredevil.