Reviews for The Gloaming
DBNY94 chapter 1 . 10/24/2016
Too much internal and external monologing during life and death combat, you CAN put the character development in a section that doesn't involve fast paced combat, that would make a bit more sense.
Guest chapter 10 . 12/27/2015 close
Guest chapter 6 . 12/27/2015
...I...don't actually get what's going on with the empty personal file
Guest chapter 5 . 12/27/2015
Oh she just misinterprets EVERYTHING
Guest chapter 4 . 12/27/2015
Pipe Dream chapter 3 . 12/27/2015
No Danny this is (hopefully) going to be a long fanfic! Badum tssh
Guest chapter 2 . 12/27/2015
Pipe Dream chapter 1 . 12/27/2015
I...don't get it; if he exposed her to her father and calls her by name then he obviously knows her identity so if she wasn't in the suit then how can she not consider that he saw her and knew that she wasn't in the suit
Specteracular chapter 12 . 6/15/2015
This deserves more attention, it's hard to find decent Valerie revelation fics. This was well done and I'm excited to start reading the sequel. I haven't checked through your works yet and I can only hope it has actually been made. (And completee considering the year this awesome Fanfiction was made)
Specteracular chapter 3 . 6/14/2015
"He could very well be the cute guy next door." That line just killed me! I love it. I don't know if TUE aired when this chapter was posted, but in it, Valerie admitted that she thought Phantom was cute. It makes sense, considering the small differences in appearance.
Bibbledoo chapter 5 . 8/24/2014
Nice, you want to destroy your crush. Tough love level 10000
Bibbledoo chapter 4 . 8/24/2014
Because they're both to adorable for their own good. And hot...
Ruby 1334 chapter 13 . 5/24/2014
That was quite an interesting ending.
So, Val's more netural with Danny, in general now.
I really loved the message that Val mentioned at the end of the story.
Very interesting plot and well written.

Thank you for writing this! :D
Ruby 1334 chapter 12 . 5/24/2014
I can't believe Val just told her dad!
I know that it would've hurt to tell him, but I think, personally that she should have just lied.

I'm looking forward to reading the epilogue!
Ruby 1334 chapter 11 . 5/24/2014
Jazz? Sam?
Hmmm, maybe Vlad was bluffing the whole time about his family and friends...
Can't wait to find out what happens next! :D
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