Reviews for The Gloaming
bibbledoo chapter 5 . 8/24/2014
Nice, you want to destroy your crush. Tough love level 10000
bibbledoo chapter 4 . 8/24/2014
Because they're both to adorable for their own good. And hot...
Ruby 1334 chapter 13 . 5/24/2014
That was quite an interesting ending.
So, Val's more netural with Danny, in general now.
I really loved the message that Val mentioned at the end of the story.
Very interesting plot and well written.

Thank you for writing this! :D
Ruby 1334 chapter 12 . 5/24/2014
I can't believe Val just told her dad!
I know that it would've hurt to tell him, but I think, personally that she should have just lied.

I'm looking forward to reading the epilogue!
Ruby 1334 chapter 11 . 5/24/2014
Jazz? Sam?
Hmmm, maybe Vlad was bluffing the whole time about his family and friends...
Can't wait to find out what happens next! :D
Ruby 1334 chapter 10 . 5/24/2014
And there it is...
The reveal.

Great chapter.
Ruby 1334 chapter 9 . 5/24/2014
Awesome battley scene!
Woo! I never thought Val could outsmart Vlad. :D
Can't wait read the next chapter!
Ruby 1334 chapter 8 . 5/24/2014
So you're telling me, Vlad went through all of that trouble, JUST to ask Danny about his ghostly wail?
Oooohh, I cannot WAIT to find out what happens next! :D
Ruby 1334 chapter 7 . 5/23/2014
Ooohh! So Val finally sees the truth!
At least she can have some common sense for once!
Looking forward to finding out what's happened to Danny!
Ruby 1334 chapter 6 . 5/23/2014
If Vlad finds out that Val knows...
Either her or Danny (or maybe even both) ARE D.E.A.D!

Oh wow! So now Danny's gone after Vlad.
Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Ruby 1334 chapter 5 . 5/23/2014
Haha! XD I felt like laughing so hard when that was the ghost who had found them! XD
Ahh, Valerie. Stubborn as always. I'm quite annoyed with her at the moment.
I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next!
Ruby 1334 chapter 4 . 5/23/2014
Well, yeah, DUH!
Reveals are always good! :D

Danny's excuse was a good one! And I knew that the Plasmius Maximus was reversed at the start of the first chapter. (That's why Danny stayed in his ghost form after he got zapped by it.
Ruby 1334 chapter 3 . 5/23/2014
Oh how I wonder wither Danny's going to tell her:
The truth (I doubt this one though.)
Half truth (most likely.)
Or just a lie.
Can't WAIIITT to find out! :D
Ruby 1334 chapter 2 . 5/23/2014
Danny's going to be interrogated. (Why do I even find that funny!?)
Anyways, great chapter! :D
Ruby 1334 chapter 1 . 5/23/2014
Plasmius Maximus REVERSED! XD
Why? I have no idea...
Something to do with Vlad giving Skulker the device for some plan of his...

Oh wow. I would've thought that Val would think that Phantom had stolen Danny's phone or something...

I guess not...

Very entertaining and well written chapter! Looking forward to whatever's going to happen next!
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