Reviews for Behind Closed Doors
shapeless shadows chapter 75 . 4/2/2012
-slow hand clap of satisfaction- You my dear are a genius you have stolen 3 days of my life -took so long because i had to stop and clean/cook/shall we say"cater" to my boyfriend- I was fully engrossed in this story the bit in wonderland was pure bliss i even had dreams about this xD (insert fanboy gushing here) i really really REALLY!-foams at mouth- hope you consider making a sequel to this with some lemony goodness thrown in (cuddles cloud plushie with big tears in eyes) the plot driven story even quelled my initial disappointment with no smexy cloud/leon action but I honestly think you kept them in character mostly and stayed true to their persona's (dont hate me for saying this...) i would gush over the sora parts too but truth be told compared to the Cleon side of things it wasn't as engrossing so... I kinda skipped them xD but all in all -pats on back and offers prized cloud plushie which angry leon plushie steal and hides in corners with- Great job keep up all the excellent work!
raerobdestiny chapter 75 . 12/23/2011
didnt really get the plot of the story.

Did Cloud and others know what happened to their Shadow-buddy?

Coz if they didnt then it would seem they didnt have a solid goal when they started venturing out to space.

Wonderland was just frustrating to read honestly. It was waaaay too long that it i just felt i was being dragged along a trip i didnt wanna go. I really didnt get why the mad hatter and jabberwock had to be 'keys' to bring back Alice's sanity. Kinda felt the Queen shoulda been more fitting. And really does Cid really swear that much to a point that it evolves into it becoming obnoxious.

Cloud was okay although he was a bit OC sometimes pre and post Wonderland. You made kinda made him out to be stupid which is far from what he is in the game much less in the movie.

Leon was okay to me too cept that he talks way to formal at times even in casual conversations.

Everyone else was in character.

My only wish was for you to limit your description of the scenery your trying to relay because it was just too much detail, too many stuuf that i really fel that i didnt need to know. That got me skipping a LOT of paragraphs because it was just too daunting.

I stuck with this story because i wanted to know if Cloud and Leon would get together in the end... And they ended up not being together. I liked it though. It was more fitting of an ending considering all the events that happened. I love how you directed the final battle. The magic and GFs were a nice touch. :D

i hope you find this review constructive than harsh :P

good luck on your future installments. Look forward to reading them
Moss The Sora fan chapter 75 . 7/10/2011
Awesome, I love how you made ALL of that fit seamlessly into KH:COM! It was a wonderful story overall. Haha thanks! It was worth reading all those chapters, plus these two new ones. I hope to read more of your stories in the future!
LimitlessLion chapter 75 . 7/6/2011
It was so good to see a new chapter after so long inactive that it's a shame to see the end of it so soon after it picked back up.

Loved it all though, such an epic fic.

Looking forward to the next fic already!
LoneCipher91 chapter 74 . 7/6/2011
-Peeks Head Around Corner, Waves-


I've been reading this story for, well, years, and now that it's reaching the very end, I decided I'd better review it.

This story has been a joy to read. I can't say it any better than that. The only thing that makes me sad is that I'll no longer be able to log on and see if a new chapter's been posted.

Anywho, I've finally gone ahead and hit 'submit'. Only took me four years!

Again, thank you for writing this amazing work!

Now, only one thing left to do...

Read it all over again!
Moss chapter 73 . 7/4/2011
Wow, I can't believe I read all 73 chapters. o.o Anyway, your style of writing is simply beautiful! I was tied to this story because of it. The plot was epic, even though I'm more of a KH junkie than a FF fan... *hides* I liked Cloud, Leon, Cid, and Riku's for the suspense and adventure, as well as their development as a character. I liked Sora's because of the suspense as well, but I am also a die-hard Sora fan, so I like anything Sora basically. XD Sora does have fans out there...Anyway, I can't wait for what's next! Darn Donald and Goofy for ruining Sora and Riku's reunion :o
Animegurl14 chapter 72 . 6/28/2011
Aww yeah, Riku is back in business! I love at how supportive he is of everyone, especially since he had to do it from the shadow. You could totally feel the love and affection he has for Sora, and their bond just feels me up with glee every time I think about it. They're just soo cute!

This story is winding down very nicely. I can't wait until the next part! :D
Animegurl14 chapter 71 . 6/21/2011
Dude, this was such a good chapter.

Yes, I am extremely biased in which character I liked the most, but I absolutely loved your Shiva voice here. I've always liked the fact that Squall was the only one who had a deep connection with Shiva, or just any GF, and that they must have personalities too instead of just being tools to use in battle.

This chapter fits perfectly in the transition between the two games, and why Leon seemed less...weighted? I don't know if I'm coming across very well, but what can I say, this chapter has left me incoherent. In a very good way of course! :)

Sorry about my griping about Cloud's character last time. I totally forgot how Cloud was in the second game, but he manages to irk me much of the time anyways, no fault of yours!

Can't wait for the next chapter!
Lady Rabenschwarz chapter 29 . 6/19/2011
I love this chapter XD
Animegurl14 chapter 70 . 6/19/2011
Wow, Cloud was pretty mopey there, especially at the very end. It's also really sad to have see Leon as broken and act differently toward him. ):

I can't wait to the next chapter! chapter 50 . 6/18/2011
Just...Cloud /sang/...with a choir...Oh god I think my brain is broken...also I just spittook all over my phone. And there were a few moments where I couldn't look at the fic because it started me laughing every time I saw the word 'Cloud'...And I still love Cid to little itty bits and pieces. And OMG Hercules...Ohhh, man. I love this fic. chapter 48 . 6/18/2011, I was gonna read through all 69 chapters (68? However many there are) and THEN review, but this had to be said. I LOVE THIS! And, especially, I love Cid. I need Cid to be a real person so we hang out and go on adventures together and he can be all-around awesome. I'm not gonna lie - I totally started reading this for the Cleon - but I'm /staying/ for the Cid.

That being said, American McGee's Alice is one of my favorite games of all time. I love it. I love the fact that you're using it as a game backdrop. I love the fact that this fic is set in-game (even though I'*cough*) I love that Sora is stuck on a ship somewhere with a crazy guy who's determined to kill them all via black hole, I love Sora. Like, for real. Thank you for not leaving him out, he brightens my day. I love this fic so much it is RIDICULOUS. Just thought I'd share that. Pardon the fangirl flailing, I had to get that out of my system.
Thien chapter 67 . 11/27/2010
Finally got some me-time to sit back and read. This chapter gives me a lot more to work with for the challenge. And I'm thinking I might be biting off more than I can chew (thanks a lot, Eden). But. I already started, and finished coloring Leon, at least. I just need to reread this chapter and the last like ten times more before moving on to Eden, heh heh.

I must save next chapter for later. Damn school.
Ryuuette chapter 67 . 11/9/2010
Very nice... very nice... Nice way to get Reeve/Cait in there... Squeon summoning... That freaking made me shiver. I mean dang! You have such a way with telling a story... and... damn sweety!

*tosses over a "live" Vaan plushie and a "live" Balthier plushie* These two are some of my favorite muses/plushies... and you deserve them both. *tosses a couple versions of "live" Squeon and Cloud over as well* Be careful with those plushies too... They're not exactly um... *coughs* Well needless to say, be careful should you want to give them a weapon... or them near each other... yeeeaaahhhh...
terracannon876 chapter 67 . 11/6/2010
d'aww, final Cid chapter ... but is Reeves now going to be talking? DDDD Haha, I can hope, can't I? XD

Very action-y and very hard to read after not looking at this fic for a long time. I'm probably going to reread a few of the previous chapters to get a sense of what's going on again.

Fun how Shiva talks to Cid. To them, it's probably like talking to something completely otherworldly. And yeah, you never NOT listen to what they have to say (unless they're evil. then they're just trying to screw with your head D).

Thanks for the chapter! Long time no see )
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