Reviews for Devotion
young dawn chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
You captured Ran Fan flawlessly. Devotion is the perfect word to sum up her character. Well done.
Wandering Namekian chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
Aww, I really liked this. I thought I was the only one writing this couple, but I'm glad to see that someone else is too. I hope that we'll get some more company soon, seeing as Ling and Ran Fan are about to make their "official" English debut.

Anyway, this is really well done and in character. I like it a lot keep up the good work. I love Ran Fan, she's my favorite character in the series.

-pat-pat-

-Dende-sama was here.

Allison
John Locke chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
This is cute, I love reading stories based on the manga so good job! Ran Fan is amazingly cute, yet oddly very strong. And you portrayed that well.

Oh and the movie is getting released straight to DVD October 3rd.
Terry-McElrath chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
Hi, Henrika!

It was good to get another story from you! I really enjoyed this story, even though it was short. I am not familiar with the FMA manga, so these two characters are new to me. At least now I feel that I understand Ran Fan and Ling a bit more. I hope everything is going well for you at college. Take care and don't forget to do something fun once in a while!

Terry