Reviews for Tangles
bookwormqueen chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
beautiful little friendship fic!
Indygodusk chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
That was nice. I liked their ease with each other. good job.
Annise chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
Really well written: I loved it. :)
Laudine chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
Oh, how lovely!
Natters chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
aw. really sweet & well written
Sheila51 chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
Absolutely beautiful. The characterisation, particularly Delenn, was spot-on. Beautiful. I loved the brushing of the hair, great. I could almost see all this in my mind which for me is good writing. This really was very, very good.
Fondued Jicama chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
I liked this alot. It isn't quite like the typical older-Susan stories; perhaps it's because it doesn't make her into some sop. But I liked the issues you addressed. I could see how leaving might have made her feel guilty- it wasn't that she didn't want to be around them anymore.

One little thing that made me giggle: you say the uniform fits perfectly, and then say the last time she's seen it was on John, and it sounds like you're talking about the exact same uniform. It must be like the Travelling Pants. (laughs)