Reviews for Runner
ms metaphor chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
Absolutely brilliant. You have a beautiful, fluid style. And I love the subtext. Very, very well done.
RavensWritings chapter 1 . 9/5/2006
I have to say, I've read this several times and it always intrigues me. I don't see many steam-of-consciousness pieces that weave the outer with the inner as well as you do.

Kudos!
spacebar chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
Wow. Just...wow. This bit wowed me especially: "...but that’s alright because there’s tough leather over the top and

no one can see

that protects almost everything, right? These are Army boots, built to last, they won’t ever fall apart because they’re

trained

made that way."

I've read some of your other fics, and I think you actually *are* Jack. I think this one is great - it's not too over the top, and it's...poetic, kinda. Just brilliant. I was looking for something that i thought could be improved, but I can't find anything. I'll say it again: wow.