Nothing fancy or particularly enlightening to say except that I really enjoyed reading this story and it's very original. I try to find "AU Tom" stories, but they're scarce and it's even rarer that they're finished. I've never read "Harry adopts Tom" and that's saying something considering my 6 years in the fanfic fandom.

There just aren't enough Harry adopts Tom fics on FFNet! This is the greatest one yet!

Anyway...I like how Tom and Harry always argue about stuff and they eventually make up. The part where Harry hugged Tom was really touching too.

There were a few parts which needed two words to be split. Example: weatherproofing - weather proofing. (Unless it actually is a word...I myself always suck at grammar tests).

Besides that, you did AWESOME!

ick, not a harry/ginny i hope? well, obviously not i suppose. hell, you could make this a harry/tom what with their little age difference. that'd be interesting.

nice story.

This was a great story! Thanks for sharing it.

Amber

Excellent fic! THanks for writing. Great job with Tom - so wonderfully distrustful.

NICE! Great story - I'm looking forward to reading the sequel! I will look for it immedeatly!

This was absolutely brilliant! Loved it!

aww thats awsome...wish it was longer thought like what was gana happen but it had a good ending!

yes this is certainly good, only other fic like this is altered destinies, or that new one with Merope x Harry pairing, and trust me we need more of all those.

YEA!

That...was an AMAZING story. I am totally in love with it. Can't read the sequel right at thi smoment, but I will be reading it later. You're a wonderful writer, and give my compliments to your beta. I know I'd be lost without mine.

Sincerely,

Update

Soon

I found this to be a very good story and have added it to my C2.

I love Tom in this! He's so cute and untrusting!;D

what a great story! I love your charactarization.

Well I am off to read the sequel. :)