Very nicely done, the theory you made sounds pretty good too.

Great chapter, I hope they start a good relation now and that Tom understand what is family, please update soon.

Wow! This is certainly ...how do I describe this..Unique. The plot alone is great. I've never read any Harry adopted Tom fic before. The language flows smoothly. But what I like the most of your story is that everyone stays in their characters. Tom isn't magiccally turn good and soft ,and Harry isn't automatically love Tom. In short,I love this story. Pls. Update soon.

Great story - the interaction between the characters is nicely done; not growing too fast or anything. Harry does seem a little too weak, though I assume he's attempting to hide his powers to some extent - I'm guessing he doesn't want to get involved with another war?

There're a couple of things that confuse me slightly in your story - Harry seems to think that he has simply gone back in time, yet at the same time there are differences, implying that he's in another dimension, or something to that effect.

Anyway, flow is good, pace is good, and overall it's an interesting read. The title isn't that great though. Could I suggest 'Matter of Opinion' or 'Yesterday' or something... not that? No offence meant. -cheerful grin-

Keep writing; hope the next chapter comes soon. :)

Loved it so far. However If Harry has a part of Voldemorts soula and powers in him he shouldbe much better in battle, say a bit morepowerful than Voldemort at full strangth. And if that was the case then we see Dumbledore subdue over ten iner circle death eaters with one spell in OOTP. You write really well and fluency is great, however I was looking forward to seeing Harry kick some ass in the last chapter.

I'm rather impressed. This is a very good story. You take the time to slowly advance the plot with out getting bogged down on things and actually 'show' what happens. I've read way to many fics lately where the author just doesn't understand the concept. I'm looking forward to the next chapter of Tom the Bitter Twelve year old _;

I like your story but i dont see why Harry's on the defensive so much with Dumbledore. Dumbledore isnt likely that powerful right now(political and support wise) since he hasnt gained his fame from Grindewald.

I find this very intriguing.

with this last chapter I can actually see Tom being a bit less of a bastard.

He still has a long way to come. (I cant see anything substantial changing in him for at least 2-3 more years).

I wonder what will happen when the entire "It was you/Tom" matter comes to pass with either Tom or Dumbledore.

I would love to see Dumbledores reaction.

This story is great! Not only is your plot line new, your writing skill is amazing. I'm enjoying this a lot, and I hope you update soon.

-aza-

This looks greaT...as long as it doesn't become slash its all good. ...I findn it weird that you make harry seem soo weak when he was the one who killed voldie in his past. You make it seem the only reason he is strong bc he has aquired old voldies left over magic and skillz...its cool but a bit annoying bc it insinuates that harry was a weak little pussy when he beat voldie...which he has to be VERY strong to beat voldie in the 1st place so it is a paradox...

Absolutely awesome #_#

With Love and Gratitude, Xenia Marvolo

Aw, how extremely cute! D Whee. I've never read something like this before, and it's super cool. xD

Please update soonn! Your story is love.

cute!

I like your theory of what happened That Night. Mine's different, but it would be no fun if everyone thought the same thing, would it? It works, and it doesn't contradict canon, so it's all good.

OH MY GOD! Another great chapter! I absolutely love the Harry/Tom interaction, It's actually cute! I now don't understand why no ones done a fic like this before. I hope you do more than your promised 10 chapters because I have never read such a great fic. It's a relief that there are still original fics out there. I hope we get to see more of the brothers later. Also are we going to see some of the Malfoys/Weasleys cause they're old purebloods and you could use to explain the family fued. I can't wait to read more,

Litha Riddle