Reviews for Tom Marvolo Riddle Potter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'd really like it if Tom saw all of Harry's scars. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was amazing... what exactly did Tom say i think i missed that part... so whoose memory was the first one... it was really good maybe i just didnt read carefully cant wait til next time -keeper |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful chapter again! yay! Les see...hm...Tom was a little mad no? Was the reason the pictures were completely ruined was because of...jealousy? or maybe just teenage anger? Hm...I think that Tom's POV would be cool but whatever you want to write that you think would best suit the story is good with me. _ I just love this smiley...it's so cheerful...okay...I'm going to go now... |
![]() ![]() Loved this chapter :) It was fabulous to read. I cannot wait for more. |
![]() ![]() Loved this chapter :) It was fabulous to read. I cannot wait for more. |
![]() ![]() Oh yes, please do some of the story from Tom's point of view. I really want to know what's going on in his head, especially after this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. It's nice to find a really good, original story that is still being updated, because most of them are dead by the time I get around to them. Your Tom is *wonderfully* in character, I love it. And don't worry about Slughorn, he's just as big and cheerful as ever, although I admit I haven't read HBP in awhile. I do admit to being curious as to where you are going with this story, on a general scale. Will this be a dark story, or will Harry eventually help Tom out of his blood-facination? Either way, I'll keep reading as this is undeniably facinating, although I *would* like to see a positive outcome. This chapter was very dramatic, showing two sides of Tom. Slight worry when Harry is passed out, although he might have an ulterior motive, and anger and hate later on, in regards to the Gaunts and Riddles, the taunts to the memorial of Harry's friends and parents, and the shattering and destroying of the pictures. I can only hope you'll continue with this story to it's conclusion, because like I said, there isn't very many of them that are as good as yours. Spirit White |
![]() ![]() ![]() Argh! He's SUCH a brat! And I wouldn't really mind switching to Tom's POV. It would be interesting to see what goes on in that evil little mind of his. Hm... I'm not exactly sure what I'd like to see yet, 'cause I'm not 100% certain where you're heading. Not sure what type of interesting confrontation - besides parseltongue and Tom's family, that is - can come out yet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! (starts to cry) Why? Why a cliffie? It just HAD to stop there didnt it? (sob) Oh, well...just update soon ok? I really want to see what happens! This is a GREAT story! So, yeah... UPDATE SOON! please? . |
![]() ![]() ![]() i absolutely love this idea for a story! it is so wonderfully written and Tom is so very IC! i love it! please continue, there really need to be more stories like this out there! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! You have a great sense of pacing in the story, and you know the right times to give details that keep me wanting more. |
![]() ![]() I think this is really origional. I actualy enjoyed reading this, sifting through all the crap on this site, it's nice to find a good fic out there. I think the characters are portrayed really well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hagrid would still be in Hogwarts, cause wasnt he still there til 6th year, and since Tom is only 12 Hagrid would still be there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely incredible. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is great! please, update soon! |