Reviews for Tides of Passion
Geiri chapter 1 . 3/21
This is a true work of art and I didn't realize how much I had missed it before I read it. You have truly made Kit come alive in this one, he felt really authentic. Keep it up!
White Eyebrow chapter 3 . 1/30
Very well done, especially for a first fanfic. This was about the time I started out. A shame you didn't write more; the potential is there.
Fanfic girl chapter 3 . 11/30/2016
I absolutely loved this story. I thought it was tastefully done. Great job
Guest chapter 3 . 11/27/2015
You know why I hate you so much? It's because of what you've done to these characters you bitch read the damn source material before you make a fan fiction
Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2015
Ok firstly what the hell is this bullshit I'm having to review. You bitch. You made kit fisto more ridiculous than Ron burgundy. Here's a tip, research the fucking source material. And further more you have ruined these characters for-fucking-ever. You punk ass bitch
Telpetari chapter 1 . 7/12/2015
I love it! I wish that there was more, too.
sudooku chapter 3 . 5/4/2015
Your story gave the term "First Aid Kit" a totally new and fresh meaning ;) .

Pink Ikawa 001 summed it up perfectly. :D This is a very modest and romantic love story not necessary to be rated M because there is no description of any sexual acts, violence or coarse language. I enjoyed every word in it. I didn't read the original comic which this story is based on. But you gave me a perfect insight into Kits and Aaylas character too. Thank you for this IMHO well-done and perfectly chiseled story.

I wished the story would end up like a Leslie Winkle-relationship (do you know "The Big Bang Theory"?)dimmed at most time to set free the pent-up passion until the very last moment once a year. But your ending is far more star-wars-realistic and character-credible.
Nienna Helyanwe 3 chapter 3 . 6/23/2013
This was absolutely incredible! I had just read the comic online that you got the base of the story from, and you have described it amazingly. I indeed wish there was more to read on this, but the ending is quite satisfying. This is definitely one of my favourite stories, and I thank you for writing it! :D
recey2010 chapter 3 . 12/29/2012
I love this I wish there was more
TheLightIsMine chapter 3 . 6/9/2010
Oh my gosh FINALLY I got an account so I can review this! This has been my favourite Kit/Aayla story EVER since I read it on livejournal AGES ago! I love how you portrayed their conflicting emotions, and their love ALL whilst keeping them perfectly in-character. Perfect ending too, however I've personally always thought they should be together. Ah well. Still an EXCELLENT story.
PazzoCuore chapter 3 . 4/6/2010
Aw! I loved that! I always thought there should've been something that happened after he saved her. I must say, your writing skills are really good. I wish I could write that! It's too bad they cant be free to be with eachother. :( But overall, that was an amazing story! :)

B-Man33 chapter 3 . 11/14/2009
great story man i loved every word. the only thing that im bummed about is that Kit and Aayla did not end up together. The Jedi Code sucks. Great story man.
Ticklesivory chapter 3 . 5/7/2009
I love Kit and enjoyed this story. Didn't much care for the sad ending. Didn't they get married in the comics? Did you mention that earlier? (Too lazy to go back and look.) Anyhoo - great job. Favorited.
Pink Ikawa 001 chapter 3 . 3/29/2009
Expertly written! Stories like this are hard to find on this site, so i am glad i found this little diamond in the rough. I can tell you are very experienced in both writing and the Star wars story this is based around. I've never read the books, but it felt like i was, you write on a published author's level. I dont think i even saw grammatical errors either! Thats a first ever as far as stories ive read have gone. I can tell you had a true passion and writing this story, which makes it so much more real for me as the reader. And im glad you didn't go into detail about the actual "sleeping together" part. Stopping just before and starting as they awake is a very professional way of preventing this from turning into a lemon. And because of that, this fic doesn't really need to be rated as M, it sound like a solid T to me.

Beautifully written, and beautifully expressed. If you dont already, im sure you'd be a bestseller!
auri mynonys chapter 3 . 7/28/2008
Aw! So sweet and sad and romantic and all in character and just... aww. I loved it. Great work with this piece. You say you're not a writer, but this is absolutely beautiful. Fabulous work.
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