Reviews for switchback
Visal chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
You should be more responsible and give a fair warning of rape (in at least your summary) as you mention it at least twice in your story. Please be more considerate towards you readers.
fantascination chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
I swear you are my favorite KH author ever. You have a distinct, unique style of writing, and I love it. i sound like a rabid fangirl, i know -_- but i rly love your stories.
selandora chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
wow. dark.

but it's epic. :) i'm so glad you gave sora another dimension to his personality, he's too overall nice guy in the game and in most fics. i liked it very much.
1557757 chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
I love the way you ended this. Breaking up the sentences with paragraph breaks was epic genius. I usually hate it when there's too much space/white in a story, but the way you formatted this physically really accented the effectiveness of the story.

-loves-

Minikimii
IsabellaRosa chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
wow
lol chapter 1 . 12/12/2007
Yuckk, horrible /
Roxxors chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
Dude, I've read this like, 16 times and forgot to comment each and every time.

Deep, very deep, love the ending. Strikes a tone.

~Animelover45
Rayvah chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
Wow
Lady KeyBlade chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
What the...?

Nice Ending!
Dragons Maiden chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
I love it when people are able to make the page's layout show an emotion of the story. It adds to it so much.

Great job.
PikaCheeka chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
You are one of the best KH ficcers ever. Just because you're so damn creepy and weird. Roxas X. Roas. Sora. I never figured that out. And thank you for believing that Axel is Riku's Nobody. I am forever arguing with people on that in forums.
Babalu chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
This scared me shitless. Good job.
The Soup chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
Poor Axie-baby! I BLEED FOR YOUU! ;( This made me emo...now I'm gonna go wear girl-pants (like it matters for me) and write bad poetry. Great story. It really yanked my heart. Thanks to KH2, I'm thankful I have a heart.

Monumental video games are the ones that teach lessons, envoke sympathy, and make one shed tears. Kingdom Hearts the Series does it to me without fail.

~The Soup
5540 chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
This is...is, oh...I don't know how to describe it...

Brillant? something around there...

The way that all the words are set up, the style, is very appropriate.
Starr Bryte chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
Same as I said in my other review... Ouch... But I didn't like how you made Sora bad... He's too pure hearted... But then again, being used as an unwilling replacement is enough to warp anybody, especially if the one your replacing is just a piece of yourself... Confusing... Ow...
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