Reviews for Time to Live |
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![]() ![]() So Harry is not JUST Lord Potter, he is ALSO Lord Black! Interesting. Harry, you're 17! A few photos of naked women or girls should NOT embarrass you! Maybe while you were 14 or 15 years old (Cho Chang in Goblet of Fire) to(Luna Lovegood in Order of the Phoenix) I could understand your embarrassment, but for Merlin's sake, grow up! |
![]() ![]() I think that James and Sirius have been very wise in their advice to Harry Potter, and I am still wondering what Harry's birthday present from Sirius Black is! |
![]() ![]() WELL dropping a WHOLE BLOODY HOUSE ON ANYONE would kill them! So it seems you were wrong, Voldemort, old boy, when you claimed your horcruxes WOULD KEEP YOU ALIVE. Well, they didn't. Not that I'm surprised, really. For a supposedly smart Dark Lord (yeah, right!) you were rather pathetic! To be brutally honest, the ONLY Dark Lord I'll EVER have ANY sort of genuine respect for is Grindelwald. At least HE ENSURED HIS FOLLOWERS WERE LOYAL TO HIM! You, on the other hand, did not. And you wondered why your Death Eaters left you? Get real! You kill them if they displease you, so why should they stay? |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is always a good technique for any writer to give his/her protagonist a nice jucy moral dilemma. Well done, thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is fun to find a US TV trope in a fanfic about a decidedly British wizard. Despite it being familiar enough to become a trope, wise Indian Grandfather is well used here. This is a fun story! Thank yous |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good story with a unique storyline and subplot. Keep writing as life allows |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Weasley's are a real trip, aren't they? They would drive me crazy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story, thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() Please, God, no Ginny relationship. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you can read them... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too bad Snape can't experience what so many children went through in his "teaching." |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far can't wait to read the sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() All the information Harry told Hermione was none of her business. What he should have said was "you are my guest. Financial matters are not your concern. If you can't accept graciously feel free to leave. Now." She is obnoxiously rude. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Terrific opening |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a brilliant story |