Reviews for One Summer Too Long
rosybell chapter 1 . 8/11/2006
That last line would have sounded better with someday at the end, but that just me. Very nice...and sad...feeled with emotion. Sounds like a song you might read in Redwall.
biacebaolck chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
it's very touching... :sniff:
Lapin Ferret chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
wow, hey that really cool. Bragoon and Saro would have liked it

if they were real that is...
Inactive12345 chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
Cute fic. I think the "ahh's" and "ooh's" and such would have made more sense if we'd have actually been hearing the song... they made the "poetry" feel of it a little awkward. But the whole goodbye theme was sweet. Nice job. XD