Reviews for Momentum
ProfEvans chapter 6 . 10/29/2016
{Ch6} I LOVE this chapter! It's amazing! I love Sirius! I love how he bonded with James! And I love Remus' heart-to-heart with his dad!
goldensnitch18 chapter 2 . 10/29/2016
Intriguing response by Sirius ... #hafhpotterhead
goldensnitch18 chapter 1 . 10/29/2016
Whaaaaat? That is crazy! #hafhpotterhead
ProfEvans chapter 5 . 10/29/2016
{ch5} Ugh! I can't decide who I like better! You're interpretations of both Remus and Sirius are so fitting, yet unique. Like, just different enough from canon to see how they'd get to canon without being there now! Also, I love that there's no instant friendship between the boys, even though that's what I'm used to seeing! It's a nice change! #HafHPotterhead
jhellrung89 chapter 1 . 10/29/2016
Great set up for the start of your story it draws me in and makes me want to continue reading to see how it develops
hurricanebridgette chapter 2 . 10/29/2016
I love how the picture and article shows how media can change people. That their (Moony and Pads) connection is so real from the start. Awww.

LadyParongsny chapter 2 . 10/29/2016
"mischief was easier to manage without constant racket." oh my goodness yes!
LadyParongsny chapter 1 . 10/29/2016
1 chapter in and I'm already close to tears.
ProfEvans chapter 4 . 10/29/2016
I loved the family dynamics! Especially of the Blacks! {ch4HafHPotterhead
ProfEvans chapter 3 . 10/29/2016
Interesting way of introducing Hogwarts, and a very realistic interpretation of a muggle mother's fears in this situation (I think, but I'm not a mother so I could be totally wrong I suppose). {ch3HafHPotterhead
ProfEvans chapter 2 . 10/28/2016
Building intrigue right away! I love it! I really like how you're portraying especially Sirius, but his parents as well! {ch2HafHPotterhead
Clearwater508 chapter 1 . 10/28/2016
#HAFHPotterhead #Ravenclaw
Lupin's Cottage is eerily heart throbbing because Lupin was always a favorite of mine. So reading about how he was attacked as a mere child breaks my heart. I loved this chapter even with the tears it almost made me spill.
wokanshutaiduo chapter 4 . 10/28/2016
Interesting take! I love how Remus craves affection, so much he doesn't push away his parents like most teenagers.
I'm curious to see how Sirius story plays out. So far he doesn't seem to be the rebel we know him as. How does he wind up in Gryffindor? Why? How does he react to Remus and Lily? I'm guessing the canon meeeting with James is changed?
wokanshutaiduo chapter 3 . 10/28/2016
Poor Remus. How heartbreaking it must have been to grow up that way. He has no sense of his own value the poor guy.
His mother definitely has a point. But he's going to Hogwarts! Yay!
It's going to be the best of times and the worst of times...
wokanshutaiduo chapter 2 . 10/28/2016
This could make the WolfStar volatile and super interesting! What makes Remus so special? How will Sirius overcome his prejudice?
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