Reviews for Momentum
wokanshutaiduo chapter 1 . 10/28/2016
#HAFHslytherin
OH MY GOD
FIRST CHAPTER AND YOURE ALREADY DESTROYING ME
THEY WERE GOING TO PUT HIM DOWN!? LIKE A DOG?! DAMN HEALERS! DAMN PREJUDICE!
ProfEvans chapter 1 . 10/28/2016
Dang! You're writing style is similar to mine in that you don't ease us into it! Harsh starting but good! And the feels already! Love it! {Ch1HafHPotterhead
hurricanebridgette chapter 1 . 10/28/2016
Yeah. Haven't read this yet. Excited to try this with our group. That first chapter immediately hits ya in the feels. Their reaction is heart warming and sad. Ward 19 to put a small boy down? How cruel. Excited to keep reading!

#HAFHpotterhead
The 5 of Spades chapter 3 . 6/21/2016
I never really considered how much Remus would have appreciated- especially knowing from a young age just how little opportunity he would be presented with in the wizarding world- being able to go to Hogwarts just like any other kid his age, and how that might have set the tone for the rest of his relationship with Dumbledore. Also, the fact that Sirius is a little brat who's been influenced so much by his parents' prejudice is genius- I would have completely forgotten that OF COURSE he was a kid once! He wasn't a true rebel right off the bat! Just a little inking, with the whole stolen book thing. This makes me think in a way I've never thought before in regards to this universe, and considering how many fanfiction stories I've read, that's saying something. Amazing...
RCGIRL chapter 48 . 5/21/2016
This was an amazing and wonderful fan fic. I have binge read it in a few days because I just could not put it down. I really liked the relationship between Sirius and Remus -it was really believable. I really appreciated that you didn't make it easier to be gay or to be with each other and , when they messed up, that all was forgiven in an instant. I wish there was a sequel written that would follow Harry through school. Life would have to be different coming from a home where you were loved and cherished. I would be interested how Harry (as a child who would be confident and likely more confiding in his uncles) would have dealt with all the challenges at Hogwarts and ultimately the horcuxes. Thank you for sharing your remarkable talent with us. #WandloreGroupRead
RCGIRL chapter 39 . 5/19/2016
This chapter was heart breaking. This is so hard to readthrowing love away. Glad your A/N showed that it won't last long. #WandloreGroupRead
RCGIRL chapter 33 . 5/18/2016
This was so lovely and fluffy. I really needed it after all the heartbreak in the previous chapters. #WandloreGroupRead
RCGIRL chapter 30 . 5/18/2016
I feel broken for these two. And that ending -tears! #WandloreGroupRead
RCGIRL chapter 28 . 5/18/2016
That was so hard to read. My heart was in my throat the whole time. While I hate that John is dead, I adore that he would give his life for his son. And St. Mungo's refusing treatment and then the healer who actually gave it -full circle and brilliant. #WandloreGroupRead
RCGIRL chapter 19 . 5/17/2016
oh no. I thought I was heart broken last chapter. I'm not sure if this is worse or just add bad heaped on top of everything else. To be betrayed by someone you love and rejected by your father. Remus must be breaking inside. You write heart ache so well. I'm engrossed in every chapter and can't stop reading. #WandloreGroupRead
RCGIRL chapter 18 . 5/17/2016
Oh my goodness. Heart breaking chapter! I can't believe that reaction considering how amazing his dad has been with everything else. Oh Poor Remushis worst fears come true. #WandloreGroupRead
RCGIRL chapter 11 . 5/17/2016
Including Voldemort here was so very clever. I really liked how you did that. I enjoyed the first kiss -it did take me by surprise considering what was happening seconds before. Such a sad ending to a wonderful kiss. Can't wait for them to figure it out. #WandloreGroupRead
RCGIRL chapter 10 . 5/16/2016
Oh Poor Lily and Poor Remus. What a mess! I'm so enjoying reading Sirius and Remus and love these lines "Is it the wolf? Remus chuckled. No it's the
RCGIRL chapter 9 . 5/16/2016
This was raw and sad and beautiful. I loved the way James and Peter reacted to the news and how you contrasted this with Sirius. This line "We're not playing a cruel joke on you Remus" is my favourite in the scene. I think Sirius' reaction was fair enough considering what he had been trying taught -it was all he knew. I really liked James' approach to get Sirius to see reason. And this line "He didn't have the heart to hate Remus Lupin. He never did" warmed my heart and made me happy for what is to come in the story. I loved loved loved the way you end it here. #WandloreGroupRead
RCGIRL chapter 8 . 5/14/2016
Your rapport with Lupin and his dad (and his mom too) is just beautiful and heart warming to read. It contrasts so strongly with Sirius' home life. I'm so glad Sirius had a group of friends like he did otherwise life would be beyond unbearable.
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