|Reviews for It's not Alright|
| V-ChanUzumakiLSSJ chapter 2 . 11/23/2012
This brought tears to my eyes, but I enjoyed it none the less. Great job.
| dimensiontimetraveler chapter 2 . 10/21/2012
omg... this is despairing... one thing tho. i thought the memorial is only for KIA's. but I guess it's every ninja in service? But still.. yea... sad.. i can't believe how everyone's like.. especially tsunade.. i'd have done the same as sakura. having ur own mentor turn on you and kill ur lover and volunteers to force abort her baby.. dam..
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Is it unhealthy to want to kill an entire fictional village for what they fanfictionly did to a fictional charcter?
| Hatake-kun chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Wow, I can't believe that i actually enjoy an unhappy fic! Nice beginning! I love it! ;D
| shen chapter 2 . 1/17/2009
oh gosh. i loved EVERY BIT OF IT. even if it was a sad ending.. lol
| cms chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
I really hope you write the ending even if u don't get 5 or more reviews. This is a really great story and I hope to see how it ends.
| darksoulwolf chapter 2 . 12/26/2007
Damn it! you had me Balling my eyes out! but it was good...none of that "I forgive you all so good bye" crap! /.\ she left them with the Guilt that had hurt kakahis his whole life...GOOD! a good ending...but I can still be sad and Mad (not really) at you...LOL
| boogotu chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
i no there's no more chapters i accidentally pressed the button.
| InARealPickle chapter 2 . 8/22/2007
Thanks for finishing the one shot. You did a lovely job.
| KdaAnimefan chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
whoa i expected her to become a missing nin and have the child, but damn man, your good
| Cadesmama chapter 2 . 4/12/2007
BAH!I knew you had SOME angst in ya...BAHAHAHAHA...well some. But it is good. It had a bit of a happy ending. Even in all its angsty glory! But hey, write more...Love to see what might happen in your next!
| eternalwhimsy chapter 2 . 4/7/2007
so sad but well written.
| YourAngelStandingBy chapter 2 . 3/31/2007
That was entirely too depressing... but such is life.
I like how she named the son Obito. You know Kakashi would love it.
| are-en1 chapter 2 . 1/25/2007
You should make more like on Naruto pov and Sasuke guilty they are and stuff and how Tsunade will be lok down on aborting baby?That was mean even for I like your writing and I know you just helping making the sequance but it still the luck making more fics
| ForbiddenLove chapter 2 . 12/12/2006
I cried the enter time.I've read many books, leters, fanfictions and many other thingsings my life and none have ever come so close to the truth, not only in my life but the life of so many others I have long ago this was a true story for me and the ones I loved & lost to the evil world we live in. In a way I thank you for writting it helps me remember and live on in hopes of peace for all that live and die on this very small blue/green planit
LIVE LIFE TO IT'S FULLEST & NEVER LET GO OF WHAT YOU HAVE!