Reviews for The Ties That Bind Us
AntisocialButterfly13 chapter 2 . 3/23/2006
Good story so far! It would be much appriciated if you could work on your spacing, though. Look at one of my story's, or any story's for that matter, to see how to space better. Update soon!
Katherine Night chapter 2 . 3/23/2006
I like this one. I'm glad her sister isn't from her father. That would be pretty cliche. The plot seems to be developing well, and you have a good grip on the characters. Make sure you seperate paragraphs as the speaker changes, and keep up the good work.
onetreefan chapter 2 . 3/23/2006
wow. this is really good. please update this soon. this is fantastic!