Reviews for To Broken Men
els1324 chapter 2 . 11/22/2014
Hahaha, oh that was all too much! It was so wonderful and so hilarious I just...hahaha!
the weirdo fandom chapter 2 . 7/27/2013
Beautiful. It satisfies my dirty, dirty mind.
my-threesome chapter 2 . 10/22/2012
Very nice.
therentyoupay chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
Great scene.
Skyrere chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
omg... this really really needs to be expanded into a full chapter story.

Narue-Nara-chan chapter 2 . 6/8/2011
So funny it's good

Thank you for the fic! (I wish you would have continued or made an XXX version)
always-kh chapter 2 . 4/12/2011
all very nicely done. the complex relationships are great.
x Cookie Jar x chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
The scent of Naruto's screams? That makes absolutely no sense. How can a scream have a scent?
sadbird chapter 2 . 5/24/2010
uuuuuh that may sound weird, but i wished you contined it XD

"come ack erection come back!" God Naruto, always makes me laugh XD
obvious things are obvious chapter 2 . 1/12/2010
this two-shot freaked me out a bit... but nevertheless, good job! :)
AmQaudrus chapter 2 . 8/1/2009
I don't if to be happy for sasuke or to be scared xD
titania eli chapter 2 . 7/5/2009
"But not Kaka-sensei," he said, butting his head affectionately against Kakashi's chin. "Sensei never tops."

Oh gawd, you give me sweet dreams. Naruto topping Kakashi? A dream come true.
FreeWolfBlue chapter 2 . 12/22/2008
I loved it I loved it I loved it! just the whole 'team 7 together' part makes me so happy! and thr sex stuff cracked me up. again, I loved it I loved it I loved it. definitely going on my faves
korel.c chapter 2 . 9/20/2008
This is a Redemption upon the wall, and I loved every moment of it.

All the moments where Sakura is so ready to torture someone for Sasuke, where Naruto is killer instinct, for Sasuke; even where Sasuke deceives them and they threaten him, so professional and cold lethal - lovely. Hauntingly beautiful. I would strive to write something this good, and including Kakashi (slapping him hard across the face as Sasuke tries everything to not go back) oh god, it was hot.

I am loving your work. If there were a thousand of this, of the same characters' personalities and same plot and the same Redemption of the same caliber, I would love them all and love them well. But there aren't, so I'll simply love this part two with all that it deserves.

Now excuse me while I read it again.
Ahopa chapter 2 . 8/22/2008
So cute! Thanks for this story, I like it too much.
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