Reviews for Browncoat, Green Eyes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I've read some good HP crossovers, but I'm confident that this is the best one that I've read. I also think that it is your best story. I've read this before, and I'm sure I'll read it again in the future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of my favorite fics ever, and I probably read it once a year. Thanks for providing so many hours of great entertainment! |
![]() ![]() Thank you so much for this story. It's utterly wonderful, nonjon. I don't know what random bug got into your brain, but it is the sort we all wish for. Keep on smiling. My Best ot You and Yours, -Scott |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha ha ha! Great ending! The sky goes on forever, and there's no rest for the (slightly) wicked! Especially when a poltergeist is involved. Really loved this story, and how you were able to draw these universes together in an almost seamless fashion.. The only (small) quibble I have is that River seems a little too close to normal by the end, but I guess that's because of Harry. And yeah, if this Harry was married to Luna for over a century, a girl more normal than River will never do again. I'd like to think Harry will figure that out eventually. In any case, an excellent story! Thanks for writing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() liked it very much need more like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you very much for this crossover fic. I wasn’t sure what to expect from this mix, but you made it very enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() I loved this! You captured the voice of the characters, it felt Firefly and Harry Potter, and was a great mash up of the two. I especially liked the resolution to Rivers issues, leaving her broken was the worst thing about the series being cancelled. All the callbacks and references were Very well done, many of them I'd forgotten until I read them here. The only suggestion I'd make for improvement is a proofreader, that's trivial though and probably not something easy to arrange in this format. I want to share this with some friends, they'll love it too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() currently reading your Harry Potter/ Firefly story, very funny..I hope you continue your stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a great story! I absolutely loved reading it. I have never read a Harry Potter firefly crossover before, but you did such a great job. The characterizations were fun and the plot was engaging. Thank you for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great storyline. Enjoy how you captured and portrayed all the characters and their interactions with both worlds. And the humor was spot on, had me laughing out loud throughout the story. Thank you.! |
![]() ![]() ![]() All things considered it is a great novel, but it has some major flaws, mainly forced pre novel by the author to prevent Harry from being OP, unfortunately it causes some shaky foundation to the story. Harry was 154 years old, and it was implied and shown that he was very powerful, yet he seems to not be good at any magic (so far as of chapter 17). That's a lot of years, being fit of mind and body, to learn nothing. In addition it was clearly stated that he went into this hibernation with purpose, not knowing when and if he will wake up, this is the main issue with the novel. I find it hard to believe ANYONE would follow such a plan with no preparation, yet the author wrote him as if he just said "ok, time to sleep". Anyone else, semi functioning brain, smart enough to come up with such a plan and go with it would have planned a head with resources: Magical bags full of items, enchanted suitcases, money, gold, special and unique magical items, etc. Harry has none of those. The few he does have he talks as if it was lucky he still has them and he lost many others since waking up, considering what magic is capable off, not having stashes of things that no one can remove from him is just not believable. Story is still good but this is that very glaring point that prevents it from being truly great, it doesn't help there are other novels very similar (but other worlds) that have similar quality, similar stories but the preparation was done and Harry didn't turn into a fix it god. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was straight out of the show, iirc...lame. |
![]() ![]() ![]() At least they established their credentials right away and you didn't waste time on a slow realization arc... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, I thoroughly enjoyed it and was sad to see it end. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Always loved this flick. I hope you come back to writing some day. Your ability to tell an amusing tale is truly remarkable. Don’t let a bunch of haters ruin your talent. I think this may be the only Firefly crossover I like |