Reviews for Browncoat, Green Eyes |
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SunPho3n1x chapter 39 . 4/27/2023 This was such a great story! I absolutely loved reading it. I have never read a Harry Potter firefly crossover before, but you did such a great job. The characterizations were fun and the plot was engaging. Thank you for writing this. |
quiet-mg chapter 39 . 4/13/2023 Great storyline. Enjoy how you captured and portrayed all the characters and their interactions with both worlds. And the humor was spot on, had me laughing out loud throughout the story. Thank you.! |
erozoth chapter 17 . 3/27/2023 All things considered it is a great novel, but it has some major flaws, mainly forced pre novel by the author to prevent Harry from being OP, unfortunately it causes some shaky foundation to the story. Harry was 154 years old, and it was implied and shown that he was very powerful, yet he seems to not be good at any magic (so far as of chapter 17). That's a lot of years, being fit of mind and body, to learn nothing. In addition it was clearly stated that he went into this hibernation with purpose, not knowing when and if he will wake up, this is the main issue with the novel. I find it hard to believe ANYONE would follow such a plan with no preparation, yet the author wrote him as if he just said "ok, time to sleep". Anyone else, semi functioning brain, smart enough to come up with such a plan and go with it would have planned a head with resources: Magical bags full of items, enchanted suitcases, money, gold, special and unique magical items, etc. Harry has none of those. The few he does have he talks as if it was lucky he still has them and he lost many others since waking up, considering what magic is capable off, not having stashes of things that no one can remove from him is just not believable. Story is still good but this is that very glaring point that prevents it from being truly great, it doesn't help there are other novels very similar (but other worlds) that have similar quality, similar stories but the preparation was done and Harry didn't turn into a fix it god. |
mst3ktoo chapter 2 . 1/18/2023 That was straight out of the show, iirc...lame. |
mst3ktoo chapter 1 . 1/18/2023 At least they established their credentials right away and you didn't waste time on a slow realization arc... |
MalSer chapter 39 . 12/26/2022 Great story, I thoroughly enjoyed it and was sad to see it end. Well done! |
Idrinktomuch10 chapter 39 . 12/23/2022 Always loved this flick. I hope you come back to writing some day. Your ability to tell an amusing tale is truly remarkable. Don’t let a bunch of haters ruin your talent. I think this may be the only Firefly crossover I like |
JimSilver chapter 39 . 12/10/2022 So many laughs! What a great fanfic, well done and thank you! |
Ken106348 chapter 18 . 11/29/2022 it wouldn't be a shell company it would be a shelf company. big difference |
Daniel Wilson chapter 39 . 10/31/2022 This gets better each time I read it! Thank you for all of your writing. Dan |
Satisfied reader chapter 39 . 9/13/2022 Such a good fic. I hope you come back because you are in a league of your own. |
SassyDKitten chapter 12 . 9/11/2022 omgomgomg please tell me that the blond from the first chapter is luna reborn or something because after this chapter my heart is breaking for him. |
Anon chapter 1 . 9/9/2022 The dialogue reads like squabbling 12-year-olds. Harry's character is kind of unlikeable and also not canon compatible. Meh. 3/5. Not bad, but not fantastic either. |
fulito chapter 38 . 8/11/2022 and another reread, it must be the 4 time I read thus fic. just some reference to firefly on YouTube and 20 minutes later I finish the first chapter. oh well, the fic is so good, it is worth coming back to. |
Soresina chapter 39 . 8/3/2022 It's more than 15 years down the track and this still holds up as a damn good read! |