|Reviews for One Day|
| realityfling18 chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
| Leafy-Golden-Bell chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
...I feel his pain and I grieve with him.
It was sad...And I love how you made "minor characters" so complex and deep...so real...
The last statement was really nice...I never really experienced having someone died whose picture I can't bear to look...but I guess, that day will come...
| SeparatedCow chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
Though it was a character death fic, something about this fic is so cute and so cuddly. Hayate always trying to impress Genma.
Gah! This is going on my favorites. Immediately.
| Sai Ya Xiao Jie chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
Oh, wow. That was really deep. I loved your description of the different settings, and the way you contrasted Genma's and Hayate's personalities while drawing parallels. Let's just say I haven't read angst like this for a long time. I'd love to see more of these
| Joecavegal chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
Aw, that was so sad. I almost cried, my eyes are like...watery. Damn I hate Baki for killing Hayate, he was so young too :(
Anyway, I loved this story, maybe I'll have a look at your other ones.
| kraD chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
it was so sweet and mellow like...and since i liked both characters (its injustice i tell you that Hayate was killed off) it made it seem so much more sweeter...
very well done, couldn't detect anything amiss (though i feel the ages were a bit off...not too sure) but keep up the gd work! make more marvellous pieces like this!
| emes chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
oh, man! that was soo good!
love love love it!