Reviews for One Day
realityfling18 chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
love it
Leafy-Golden-Bell chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
...I feel his pain and I grieve with him.

It was sad...And I love how you made "minor characters" so complex and deep...so real...

The last statement was really nice...I never really experienced having someone died whose picture I can't bear to look...but I guess, that day will come...
SeparatedCow chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
Though it was a character death fic, something about this fic is so cute and so cuddly. Hayate always trying to impress Genma.

Gah! This is going on my favorites. Immediately.
Sai Ya Xiao Jie chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
Oh, wow. That was really deep. I loved your description of the different settings, and the way you contrasted Genma's and Hayate's personalities while drawing parallels. Let's just say I haven't read angst like this for a long time. I'd love to see more of these

Xie xie

Sai Ya
Joecavegal chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
Aw, that was so sad. I almost cried, my eyes are like...watery. Damn I hate Baki for killing Hayate, he was so young too :(

Anyway, I loved this story, maybe I'll have a look at your other ones.
kraD chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
...i cried...

it was so sweet and mellow like...and since i liked both characters (its injustice i tell you that Hayate was killed off) it made it seem so much more sweeter...

very well done, couldn't detect anything amiss (though i feel the ages were a bit off...not too sure) but keep up the gd work! make more marvellous pieces like this!
emes chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
oh, man! that was soo good!

love love love it!