Reviews for Broken Light
Renn chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
Very good portrayal of Apollo during the revolution arc. Loved it, thanks for sharing!
Hakka chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
I found your little shot really intriguing, with an Apollo completely in character, that's the Apollo I knew and love! It seems like it's somekind of a script for an original novel to be included as extras in a Revolution volume. :)

Really, really beautiful, and yeah, sad, as half of that cycle is.

I would have really really loved to read more on him (and/or his better half) from you pen/keyboard. :)
whiteironastrid chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
I love this story. It shows how Apollo was feeling so well. D:

It just reminds me of that part of the story... it was so depressing.

I haven't really been following lately... so I can only hope things begin to get back to normal between those two again, eventually... I hope. :l
Naniris chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
Loved it. It's great seeing some recent Authority fanfic.

I enjoyed how you captured Apollo so well. Truly enfuriated and frustrated at being left. Played nicely with his ever-present love for his bitter half. It's nice reading fics that fit snuggly with canon.

Jenny was cute, I just wanted to hug her.

Grade A job!