|Reviews for A lovely complex: My Humps|
| Fluffy an Youko Girl chapter 23 . 1/14
Aww kind of wish this was a hakudoshi and kagome fanfic but i still wanna see how kagome and sesshomaru are going to be together
| Kagomaru-sama chapter 23 . 8/14/2013
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| brandypandyxxx chapter 13 . 2/6/2013
| LoreleiJubilation chapter 23 . 1/22/2013
Lol! Next chapter please!
| herby93 chapter 23 . 12/26/2012
Keep it coming
Please update soon, i wanna read more
| TheQuietHyuga chapter 23 . 12/10/2012
nice I like this. Is there going to be any more?
| Magykrider chapter 23 . 4/28/2011
I love this story, and I don't mean to sound rude, but it's been about 2 years since you have updated. Are you ever going to update again or what?
| Matsuo Hotaru chapter 23 . 3/17/2011
Wow, i think Kouga and InuYasha make my IQ go down lol... so how was Kagome discover? It went from Hakudoshi saying its time for him to collect her, to her being unconscious in her apartment with Sesshoumaru there... to Sango being behind a plant, sounding like she has been behind it for the 5 days that Kags has been sleeping.
| Megan Consoer chapter 23 . 5/24/2010
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
| estelin chapter 19 . 5/16/2010
this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing.
| RevieWriter chapter 4 . 12/7/2009
interesting story but there are many gaps and your chapters do not flow together. try sticking it all in one word document and reading it as a single entity. Also i am curious what does Kagome do for a living? what was her life before she came back? does she have friends and family else where? is she from a traditional family shrine like in the comics? you also pick up and drop characters stories erratically never mentioned what happened with Menomarou. You seemed to start something with hojo then dropped it, same with naraku, mentioned but then dropped. how about rin? what happened to her you never mentioned her going home and does she have some sort of sitter? (if so why did Kags have to watch her) Also doesn't Sesshomaru notice that he never sees temara? and that she is never at home (kags appartment.) if your looking for plot lines you could include
- Kagome is engaged (sessh must woo her instead (must talk to Kags family)
- something could go wrong with the shikon trapping Kags as tamara (since it is a demo)
either way don't know if your still writing this but i suggest you review it and rewrite and flesh out parts that make no sense, Also do not introduce characters for one scene then drop them even if you have to make up some cheesy excuse like (for Menomaru) he had to go back to china to sort out a uprising (which later could add into a different plot line of kags getting actually kidnapped for bate for Menomaru) or just take out parts totally (since Hojo is not going to be part of the story make the secretary nameless and have it be a generic conversation(that also opens up an extra character if you need him)
thats all I have to say for now write me if you rewrite this and add chapters.
| Azumigurl chapter 23 . 9/15/2009
| OnyxTears chapter 23 . 7/22/2009
| Yani Girl chapter 10 . 6/30/2009
I freakin love this story!
Poor Kagome wut kinda trouble
have u weaved urself into gurl!
not one hottie demon ruler, BUT 2!
Big pimpin Gome!
| XxBlEeDiNg BlAcK rOsEsXx chapter 23 . 6/27/2009
Your story is truly good. I really like it. You should update soon, im curious as to where this story will lead, and to tell you the truth its looks like its heading to a good place. ] Please continue with this awesome story, as i await patiently for the next update!
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