Reviews for The Moon in the Darkness
Itachi'seyecandy chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
so true. :'( sniffle.
Happy Writin!
math music reading chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
Beautiful, I love the analogies.
amanda chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
very good
field innocence chapter 1 . 11/20/2006
I love it. It make sences. So beautiful.
Lady kHOLIC chapter 1 . 10/27/2006
Oo nice
corinthrizze chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
Very creative! I loved it.
Windflight chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
So poetic!
Lems chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
wow deep and so right ! :) great job :)
tsnade chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
dude, that was awsome! the poetic words and the whole metaphor was brilliant and you wrote it so well! and you perseived an aspect of naruto that i kinda didn't think of (i know that sounds lame, but the whole metaphor did related to the story) i hope you write more fics like this! l8er g8er!
NanamiYatsumaki chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
that was amazing! loved the comcept!
kenshinlover2002 chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
It's good. Although I don't see the SasukeHInata part. I see some sort of triangle. The darkness(Sasuke) likes the moon(Hinata) who likes the Sun(Naruto)but doesn't notice her and who likes Pink blossoms (Sakura) who loves the darkness.
Purple1 chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
Oh I love how you portrade Sakura. I think her part was the best. Hell, they were all good. :]
K chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
It's a good story.
Shizuka Usagi chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
Neat story. I like the implied SasHina and NaruSaku. Keep up the good work. You pulled some nice alliterations and metaphors.
juliagulia1017 chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
that was a very nice piece. i enjoyed the comparisons and the alliteration. wonderful job!