|Reviews for Fine Print|
| Gracie chapter 4 . 12/10/2017
That ending was great!
| Project Unfazed chapter 3 . 12/21/2014
I love this Fanfic!To me, it's one of those stories that the author makes the characters on-point at all times.I can totally see this make it so believable it's unbelieable!I can't help but go 'D'AWWWWW' at Hayate's/Dakota's is one of the 3 Fanfics I always go back and read.(I've read this about 6 times as of when I am posting this.) x)
| SevenGemsOfLove chapter 4 . 12/3/2012
Uh..what did he mean by 'using his legs?" I didnt get it...
| Kra Erizabesu chapter 7 . 11/20/2011
I'm new to fanfics and I just read this. Let me start off and say this is very good. I love this couple! They are my favorite couple in the entire world of manga/anime. You've just made my day. Arigato!
| Ramen Time chapter 7 . 11/17/2010
i dont know why i never faved this
or given it a review. 0.o i read this
story multiple times because its just
so damn good. its well written, not
ooc, and sweet. thank you for writing
such a wonderful story. _
| beanza3 chapter 7 . 11/28/2009
the best part... the last paragraph... i totally understand what you mean... story ideas... music... random surpluse... untill i finally sink into unconcoiusness... love your story though...
| beanza3 chapter 2 . 11/28/2009
in response to the first chapter... the buttons white.
For the second chapter... this is a good story... hit roy away!
| Once Upon A Twilight chapter 7 . 11/30/2008
I LOVE YOU. :)
haha. well, anyway.
i'm not even sure where to start - i absolutely adore this story! it's funny & sweet, but not overly so; it was realistic enough that i could imagine every moment, but not so trite that i stopped reading. amazing! :D
| Nature9000 chapter 7 . 1/11/2008
This was great! I do enjoy reading Roy and Riza pairings, although a lot of what I find aren't so great, but this would be in the other group of the ones that were great. I thought you did Havoc's talk with Roy rather well, not many fanfics I have seen will provide Havoc in that light. Usually it's Havoc as either an idiot or an obstacle of some sort to Roy and Riza having a relationship. I always thought that Havoc would be sort of a best friend to the couple and other than Riza, the best subordinate. I loved the dog, but of course the end would have been one of my favorite parts. Usually when the said couple finally gets together that's often the best part.
| Fuchannini chapter 7 . 1/3/2008
It's me :-) A FMA fic? yay! The only anime that I actively saw via netflix. Roy and Hawkeye are so meant to be. The major strong point of this fic was when they went to the park together and you described the scene. I liked the different senses that you appealed to. It flowed very well and just set the mood for the stolen kiss. I don't think you rushed his realizations as you said in your A/N either. A weak point? This is only my opinion and you can do what you want with it... The beginning really didn't need to have the reflective Ed and Al stuff in there. It was good that you pointed out that it had been a month since the movie, but reflecting back for so long was not a strong point in your story. Possibly unnecessary for the plot between Roy and Riza. You say you hate exposition…why not skip it or add tidbits when tumbling along in the story instead of all in one or two strung together paragraphs? All in all this fic was a win. The cuteness and fluffiness at the beginning was a good way to set things up. Also, I think it would be better to read longer chapters, but you might get less reviews that way. Anyway. I went on long enough.
| srdfgchvjboguvjh chapter 4 . 12/24/2007
you story is well written, and your a.n.s make me laugh. i figure, if people are going to bother to put in an a.n., it might as well be humorous. this story makes me happy. yay for fluff! i'd love to talk some time, because i also write fanfic and i am constantly on the look out for someone to bounce my ideas off of. and to rant at about how much i despise royed pairings. my email is if you decide to contact me. thanks, and keep writing!
| LexyGirl89 chapter 7 . 9/29/2007
well... that story turned out better then i thought. i love the dog...lol
| LexyGirl89 chapter 4 . 9/29/2007
im not sure why your not happy with it...i mean it was a good chapter. they seemed relaxed and didnt have to worry about anything and just enjoyed the day and eachothers company...
| LexyGirl89 chapter 3 . 9/29/2007
i like it so far. it shows a diferant side of riza and roy. in every story that i read roy was always the first one to tell her to call him by his name not his rank or last name. its good that youve written it like this. its a change...im going to keep reading now. see you on the next chapter...
| foolish-sage chapter 7 . 6/4/2007
I loved that story, especially how you kept the minor characters pretty true to their personality. The greeting Armstrong gave Mustang made me giggle moronically, it was great.