|Reviews for Fate|
| swartzvald chapter 5 . 7/10/2014
I think you mean passed out. Passing away mean that he died. Unless that's what you meant, then ignore this comment.
| AS chapter 7 . 6/18/2013
this fanfic is boring now i quit
| HarimaHige chapter 4 . 5/16/2013
Best chapter so far. Great incident with Shinobu. Very LH typic szenario. I hope its not happening again because he didnt do anything wrong. He doesnt have the guilt from original Keitaro and therefore should stand up for himself.
Finally Haruka showed some concern for Keitaro. Very good.
The part with Naru was also very well written.
| HarimaHige chapter 3 . 5/16/2013
Not much development but still it has his purpose.
| HarimaHige chapter 2 . 5/16/2013
I like the Kitsune part in this chapter. It was in her nature to do that.
Haruka was strange. It seemed like she didnt cares.
| HarimaHige chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
Because I like your story I will review all chapters. I hope its OK ;-)
This was a good start to this story. Very realistic setting.
| lucian4025 chapter 7 . 5/4/2013
Loving it so far, great story. However, I don't like the way you point out the emphasis throught the chapters. It's up to the reader to figure that out, and having the author do it for you is a bit insulting to experienced readers. You can get your important points across without pointing each and every one of them in that manner you are doing so. The world's greatest masterpieces of literature get their points across in varying degrees of subtlety. If people can't pick up on them, at least it's still a great read. Keep this in mind as you go forward.
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/22/2012
boring boring thank god yu quit this crap
| Mountainsage72 chapter 7 . 11/6/2011
I look forward to more.
| Mountainsage72 chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
The farmer REAPS after SOWING.
| TheHard chapter 7 . 1/3/2011
loved your story, hope you can continue it soon :)
| Demon King Piccolo chapter 6 . 11/21/2009
Hmm, very good story so far, and I'm eager to read more!
| SentiNel090 chapter 7 . 10/28/2009
Want more! So far it has been quite interesting, so I hope you get more chapters out soon!
| saiyan prince1 chapter 7 . 8/14/2009
well hope to be able to read some more soon. its a good fic
| Full Metal Coast chapter 7 . 8/7/2009
Great Story cant wait for the next update