Reviews for Primal Magic
Jestrbob chapter 16 . 7/11
miss nique chapter 16 . 2/9
Damn you should really finish this story cause it was getting really good
Satsuki2015 chapter 16 . 1/19
really love the story can't wait to see what happens next hope you can update soon
Guest chapter 3 . 12/18/2015
But Harry is a Black by blood through his grandmother Dorea
shadowwolf2345 chapter 15 . 10/18/2015
I very much like this story you should write more soon when you have the chance to get more ideas out but do write more soon.
Saissa chapter 8 . 6/12/2015
It is canon that Tonks was in Hufflepuff House and NOT in Ravenclaw!
Daniel6 chapter 8 . 5/21/2015
Nymphadora was in Hufflepuff, not Ravenclaw.
Blazeb79 chapter 16 . 4/29/2015
Very good story , a shame it won't be finished.
god of all chapter 16 . 3/26/2015
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
MeinGimli chapter 16 . 3/14/2015
it seems now you are out of ideas. and it started good. damn too bad
Daniel6 chapter 5 . 2/25/2015
Why has no one realized that the blood wards don't work, or at least are crumbling. Tom was resurrected using Harry's blood. Correct? And it's Harry's blood that charges the wards. So what's to keep Tom from storming the place right now?
Daniel6 chapter 3 . 2/25/2015
I know the marriage contract is part of the storyline, however, Harry already has a strong tie to the Black family. His grandmother, Dorea Potter, her maiden name is Black. Her nephew is Sirius. Making him and James first cousins. Once removed of course because Sirius was kicked out as a student. Making Sirius and Harry second cousins, once removed. And the trio of Black sisters (Bellatrix, Narcissa & Andromeda) are Harry's third cousins. Making Nymphadora and Draco his fourth cousins.
Now, in theory anyway, Harry would need an even stronger tie to the Black family. Hence his upcoming nuptials to Nymphadora. Huh. I wonder what his friends are gonna say about this?
Daniel6 chapter 2 . 2/25/2015
In other words, he's scared of Minerva. :-D
It was a nice change of pace to see an understanding Dumbledore in this type of scenario. And to see Molly in character was a real treat. Or would it be Mother Weasley? :-)
And did anyone notice that Sirius' initials are S.O.B.? Son of a...biscuit eater. Am I the only one to notice this? :O
kitkat1197 chapter 3 . 1/11/2015
Good story. I really like it so far. One issue. Dorea black married Charles potter and had James potter. Harry is a black by blood. But ignoring that (you can always put an author's note in) this is a great story so far. The plot is developing quite nicely.
Almia chapter 3 . 1/5/2015
You got one fact wrong Harry's grandmother was dorea poter nee BLACK
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