Serious review here: if you are looking for good plot and well written story don’t bother reading this. I saw people’s reviews saying this was an amazing story and oh well it wasn’t that great for me. It is hard to get into the story and it is hard to understand the character well. There is also unecessary plots here and there just adding to the confusion.

You should continue its an amazing story

Please finish the story!

Gahh! I know you said this was finished but it’s been soooooo long I hope you haven’t forgotten! It’s too good to leave at this!

Somehow,I kinda glad that neji was dead during the war...
& becuz of neji was 'moving on' to his 'better place' earlier than anyone, I think I either gonna kill those who has interrupting their rare & final fucking chance to enjoy their pleasure; which they're probably that bitch from earlier who's yelling at naruto, kakashi & iruka...& I think there's still more of them-_-

I mean... Really? The only full smutty part was naruto's wet DREAM, which means that's even REALLY happen to him in reality goddammit DX

So far I enjoy the story a lot XD

M

its so extrem sad that you did stop writing more on your Story...
i so wanted to know if they di stay together after the marriage...how soon iruka finnds out that this two are together...as kakashi seems to know from the beginning...
and if when they try to stay away from each other...and say...maybe someone like gaara or some other guy trys to come closer to naruto if sakuke runs back to him Shooting...mine mine back off...while kicking them...or such...or if naruto really comes together with an other guy...

but i find it good that they dont jump in bed together bevor the wedding...it would be not good...

i hope you come back one day to finish this story

one Thing i dont understand is...why should this not continue after they become Brothers...they are no blood Brothers...only adopted by each of there father...so its not illegal... it only depends on them... and how accepting there parents are...an even not that with both nearly legal...:)

Please Update soon.

More chapter please

I know you might not go on here any more. Or that maybe you have gotten bored with this ship. It could be a possibility. Since it's been many years since you've updated. If you decide to not finish the story, I suggest you let an author with good quality skill take over. If you don't want that then I think you should consider finishing it. Or updating it one last time and ending the story. It's cruel to let your readers go. This is an amazing story and I'd be disappointed if it wasn't finished. Thank you!

You should update! like super duper pretty please i can't be left hanging like this i wanna know how this goes

Haha! Funny images. You should really continue soon. I loved this. I was sure they'd be found out back there. That would've been soo awkward. Anyway continue please. I want more.

Daammnn... Too bad this story hasn't been updated in a while, it was still worth reading! Frustratingly hot all the way haha!

Up. Date. Please.