|Reviews for Tenchu: The Flames of Fudo|
| Aki chapter 10 . 12/29/2015
Still waiting since '13 ;) i love this fic.
| Ragnorok chapter 4 . 12/27/2014
I enjoy reading your story. I love the way you vividly describe the setting. And I think you nailed Ayame on the head, as she always seemed to be a quick quip type. i am sorry if this is later, but I do enjoy this. And there are so few Ayam x Rikimaru. This is definately a jem. Keep it up.
| Guest chapter 10 . 12/17/2014
This reader is still alive. I like the life you bring to the characters, as they are largely lifeless in the games. In terms of writing, I see nothing subpar. There are a few moments that are exemplary (such as rikimaru's run back to the healer), and while I think that you can still improve as a writer, I also think this fic is definitely above average. I can't wait to see what you do with all of your characters. It's quite the cast for only ten chapters. We have two heroes, with now a possible three more. We have at least three main villains (onikage
| Gunzgalore chapter 1 . 6/25/2014
Loving it so far
| Dokuganryu chapter 10 . 7/17/2013
Actually its been a seven year hiatus, since you published this novella back in 2006 and updated two months prior in 13th may 2013. I'm a big fan of the Tenchu franchise and other stealth games like Shinobido, Ninja Gaiden along with its reboots are nothing more than hack and slash, no stealth involved, likewise with Shinobi and Nightshade, if anything else Shinobido and Tenchu could be considered the only true ninja games since they feature stealth as the main part of a mission's success, unlike Naruto, the number 1 knuckle head, Sasuke's all about stealth though, it would cool to see a spin-off concerning Sasuke with missions like assassination, elimination and theiving, it would be so cool
| tenchu girl 1 chapter 10 . 7/8/2013
I dont like this ending could you change it. I want meh oh to capture and try to use her to bring his form back to him but rikimaru saves her again and i want you tell us in the story what happens when fire and darkness is one
plus i am a huge aya/riki fan
| recchinon chapter 10 . 6/28/2013
aah ok, i want more ...
| recchinon chapter 8 . 6/28/2013
aww... i plan to leave a review later but i cant help not to review this chapter.
let me tell you, you describe Rikimaru and Ayame perfectly like what I have in my mind. I love it. I love the plot too! it is HARD to find Tenchu fanfic with RikiAya pairing which contains romance and action and written beautifully. Yours have it all.
Ah a little mistake is in some chapter before, about some kanji Ayame found on the collar, you said it was read "KJ". it was wrong because Kanji is not like alphabet, it is not read ABCDetc but a word. For writing alphabetical initial, japanese write with roman alphabeth, but since it is feudal era, usually every daimyo (land lord) there had a kind of symbol for their family, like a sakura, clover, swan, whatever... :) sorry if my explanation confusing...
| aya chapter 10 . 6/7/2013
You're back! Omg. My little girl heart is so happy to see you update! I've read this story over and over again the last four years! I was just gonna read it again tonight before bed then I saw the update date changed. I don't want to believe at first but yay! Hearts to you for writing this awesome fic! I'll be waiting for the chapters! Always. Hihi. :"D
| Asphodel Nightshade chapter 10 . 5/30/2013
Wow 4 years! O_O glad you still alive _ not bad a ending though! hope to read more stories from you!
| Guest chapter 8 . 5/24/2013
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| Mari's 6636 chapter 10 . 5/13/2013
:D I'm so happy you're back! I never lost hope.. TT
| Bloodwitch Raven chapter 10 . 5/13/2013
P.S. I forgot to ask you if this connects to the fourth Tenchu game?
| Bloodwitch Raven chapter 9 . 1/26/2013
I like it. I try to understand the "Rikimaru and Ayame" romance thing, but can't... :(
I do have a question about the story... it's takes place a little before Shadow Assassin or during/after? I haven't played the main series for- Well, never actually! Just Tenchu Z. ;(