i pas de révolt dans l empire .vitiat exterminerait tout révolta mois que dans cette histoire i pas d empreur étan donner que revan et malak ne l on pas rencontrer

England uses miles not kilometres

I must confess, after reading the story a 2nd time I am no longer impressed with it.
Especially the last chapters show that the author just wanted to finish the story.
There are so many unfinished parts...biggest: what happend to Dumbledore and his plan?

I'm not going to lie, I expected more, I found the dialogue between the characters to be quite forced at times and the ending was resolved very easily. Some characters are just thrown in and don't make much difference to the plot, Harry's sister could be removed from the plot along with Sirius and it wouldn't change anything, in some moments the story just seems to favor Harry, so I don't think they would be missed so much. Apart from some Star Wars concepts, there is very little of the same, at no point are the Sith on Earth called Darth, which is basically the title that basically indicates their position in the hierarchy of the Sith empire, which left me less excited about the rest. of the story was when Kael decided that he would avenge his apprentice and in fact if he were a real Sith, he wouldn't care about the death of his disciple, since within the Sith philosophy, the relationship between master and apprentice should be of total distrust with one trying to stay in power while the other tries to surpass his master, if the apprentice dies, then he was not worthy of being a sith, it is not the master's duty to avenge his student but to find a better apprentice worthy than the idiot who was killed by Revan, but at no point do any characters appear who can fulfill this role on a planet where, according to Revan, ''There are thousands of force bearers'', but there is none that he could take him as an apprentice, even Revan himself could have crossed his mind at that moment to try to convince him to become his new apprentice or Bastilla. For Revan to say that Harry Potter's magic is dark side abilities also seems quite forced, it doesn't make sense, you see, for example, a wizard casting a spell to tidy up the house and see how he is exercising his dark side power, this story that Star Wars magic is completely from the dark side is more flawed than trying to make the wands be the reason for them not going to the dark side completely, there are witch clans on Dathomir who exercise the good side of the force not just the dark side, as most on the fanfiction net like to point out in reviews, they could have just used that as a justification for them being magic users.

frabchmenr neutraliser un sits avec un stupefix

bon je vois pas comment des avions de chasse terrèste puise détruitre des chasseur avec des capssiter supèrieur a la terre .commes des une propulsions supèrieur des blimdages des bouclier et des compensateurs inerciel et un puissance de feux supèrieur

nermal bastilia shan auraisdu detècter le sédatife ou mem le neutraliser

pour quoi les jedi nom pas retirer l ensence de voldemorts dans sa sicarrise

Dumbles is as much a Dark Lord as the others. No sorry,the ends Don't justify the means.

So in the end Revan and Bastila don't get back together ... What a disappointment

Bastila to Revan a couple chapters ago "Omg I love you so much, if you go dark so will I"
Bastila to Revan now " Omg I can't believe being around you is making me go dark, I wanna leave"

Wtf

Why is HK-47 the best character everytime he's introduced into fanfics? Great scene, can't wait to see how Revan spanks Heto

Outstanding story! Amazing from beginning to end; well done, mate.

Glad to see Lily, at least, has managed to pull her head out of her arse. Pity the same cannot be said for Sirius.

Geez, it seems like almost everyone in this story is a hypocrite except for Revan.