|Reviews for A Pox On All Honour|
| Mezurashii chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
What a lovely little one shot. I've always wondered what they could have been doing on their way back to port royal. (never even considered that Will might also be in the brig) You've really kept them in character and what's even more you've kept their manner of speech in character. Really like all the little humorous bits through out and I can actually see them having this conversation.
I think I'll go and check some of your other stories.
| qwertyuiop678 chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
LOLZ! "you can name your first kid after me" loved it!
| time4achange chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
Engaging right to the end. I love your Jack and Will ... and your Elizabeth. Are you sure you didn't write the movies?
Thanks for sharing this with us.
| F8WUZL8 chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
"How many times do I have to tell you, whelp?" Jack continued, tacking firmly back to his original course. "You have to treat a fine lady like a ship. Don't assume you know what she should do. Don't try to tell her what is best for her. Let her tell you what she wants."
Uh... Jack, do you have, like, real conversations with the pearl? Cause it's beginning to seem like you do...
Lol, real funny oneshot, and both characters are very in character. I liked it!
| SD chapter 1 . 9/20/2007
And I thought I'd read everything you've posted here. This one's new to me, and of course I love it! *applause*
| Peace Like a River chapter 1 . 5/16/2007
Wow, I think this story has the best handle on Will and Elizabeth out of all the fics I've read so far. "You have to treat a fine lady like a ship." Lovely. Great job!
| BOC42 chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
Beautiful one-shot! I can always hear Jack talking whenever you write his dialoug. Good work!
| music nerd chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
i love it! the language is great; more specifically, the writing style is highly engaging, and there's descriptive language! i love descriptive language! it's one of my favorite things in the world! second only to music... and maybe vocab... well, at any rate, this is really good, and now i have to go read more of your work!
| vintena chapter 1 . 7/31/2006
I know I read this a while back, and for some reason didn't review. I was probably conducting a reading marathon of all of your stories, and got so caught up, I just forgot!
This is so very good! So very typical of all of your work. I can just picture those two, their expressions, Jack's gestures, so perfectly! I don't know how you do it, but you certainly know how to capture their personalities and you have no problem keeping them in character! Excellent!
| coyotelaughing chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
Lovely! Brilliant! AND JACK AND WILL ARE BOTH IN CHARACTER!
You, my friend, have achieved the impossible : a well written, grammatically correct, marysue-less, OC-less, non-sucking POTC fanfic! And Jack and Will are both in character. Very, very well done. The POTC world needs more authors like you and more fics like this. Good work.
| PandorasCurse17 chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
I love Jack's LOVE for his ship. I'd think if he hadn't befriended Will and Elizabeth it would probably be the only thing he cared about. However, Will and Elizabeth are both the best examples of a friend anyone could hope for. They have absolute faith in you and will help you in anyway possible! That's why I love this show! You've the hillarious Sparrow and the amazing love/friendship/loyalty/bravery of Will and Elizabeth.
My favorite line in this piece of yours is: A pox on all honour! I hope it’s not contagious
| LoveforLogan chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
Very cool. I love the ending and some of the humor, very cool and very good.
| UnStabler chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
A TERRIBLE thing has happened. You see, I've read all your fanfic. There's no more. This makes me sad. Obviously, you must write more. Especially for Crossing the Bar and Worthy of His Steel.
And I think I would have stolen Aztec gold to have an English teacher that wrote PotC fanfic when I was in high school... I'm a sophomore special ed major now, and I blessedly got out of freshman comp and lit with my SAT score.
| meowbooks chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
Wonderful! I loved the title, and you have them done so well you can see them, hear them, it all fits it could be a deleted scene for all we know! Wonderful!
| CaptainTish chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
That was great! “Let’s just say, son, that when a woman offers to marry a man in order to get him to rescue another man, this may be a sign of undying affection for one of them, but which one do you think is the lucky man?”
You write Jack so well, and he is so entertaining. There are actually people out there mad at Elizabeth for rejecting Norrington? Weren't they paying attention when they were watching the movie?