Reviews for A Private Moment
Sparkleyangel chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
I love your story :D
she chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
amazing lovers DOTTY :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
pure utter sweetness brains right from who they are you wouldn't expect them to be like that but its nice to see that they are like that makes me love them even more...
Shortcake99 chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
That was really cute! I loved the way that Mia didn't tell Brian what they were saying
demonhybrid13 chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
You don't speak Spanish, do ya? :D hahaha very good one-shot though. I loved this little moment. Even though it was narrate din Mia's and Brian's perspective.
TheStarSorceress chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
Really really sweet LOL! Keep up the good work.
MmmSuite chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
I liked it but the ending was a little out of character for me. Good job though!
1morning glory1 chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
Aw so sweet! I loved it. Great one shot.
OnceUponACaskett chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
Wow, that was really good! I liked it. Keep writing.
degrassijayandalex chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
Aw nice one-shot. I also thought that this part was funny:

“Eavesdropping is pointless when you don’t speak the language Brian.” He jumped, turning around to see Mia grinning at him.

lol. Oh and thats nice at the end what they said to each that Mia wouldn't tell Brain:

Will you stay with me forever?

Eternity baby.

I think that you should write more Dom and Letty fan fictions! ) Cuz you did a great job with this one! )
Santiva Potter chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
This is extremely well written. Wonderful job.

Much Love,

Santiva Potter
Clase406Marcela chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
m3lvyn chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
bebe de la eternedad means "eternity's baby" you should have said por la eternidad mi bebe i know it like two years late the correction but i jjust like to correct people about there spanish
writestyle chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
RETIRED666 chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
aw! how sweet!
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