Reviews for Stormy Night, Unafraid Hearts
LW12 chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
its good
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2014
Great stuff :) But the only think that bothers me a lot is that you continued to use the word 'as' where it wasn't necessary. I felt like the sentances were repeating because you used it too much. Next time, try not to use that word so much. Thanks!
emoprincess94 chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
I loved this story! :D :D
Unknown lol chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
U did a very good jod
Anana553 chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
a.w.e.s.o.m.e

great job
CrUsHeD CaNdY kIsSeS chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
that was such a sweet story, it was really good, you are a great writer.
Gotta Dance 88 chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
Lovely, absolutely lovely.
Wolffie12 chapter 1 . 12/21/2006
Very good. Two thumbs up for you. :)
queenofthedonuts chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
Do more, pretty please! Loved it. I just got finished reading the one about Christmas and I hope you decide to write more FMA! Ed and Winry were definitely meant to be... :)
RogueRaven21 chapter 1 . 10/16/2006
This was so good and so sweet! You write really well, I'll have to check more of your work.
Fluffbeast chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
I really liked it and i hope you do more FMA in the future, but you did tend to use "would" a lot. there are other ways to phrase a sentace that would enhance the peice and make it feel less repetative.

(Not flaming or trying to be a dick, just trying to help)
008333 chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
two words (love it)
inlesbiansavectoi chapter 1 . 9/18/2006
Good. More. Please. Good bye.
Grand Zephyrus chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
i really liked it kind of strange how all that got started though
Ripuku chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
aw... so sweet. especially ed. it was so nic eof him to confort winry when she was scared.
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