|Reviews for One Moment|
| strawberrydonut chapter 1 . 10/10/2006
Hello! I had just started watching Scryed when I came across your story and I just had to re-read it after having watched episode 21. The anime itself leaves so much left to be desired in regards to Ryuho & Mimori's relationship. This ficlet of yours was able to fill in those empty spaces and leaves us RxM fans panting for more of your stories. Bravo and Thank you!
| LivEviL chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
Yep, yep, you are quite right about the last name, don't worry! BY THE WAY! I LOVED YOUR STORY! I can't say I've read any of your Trigun material, but if it's as good as this, I just hope you can find a way to balance the two. I like how you got Ryuho and Mimori together without completely bashing Scheris. I admit, I don't much like the blue-haired girl, but you really can't help who you fall in love with, so how can you blame her? I like that you let her down gently, is all. And you captured Ryuho and Mimori excellently. I was kind of hoping for a Cougar response, but it wasn't like it was necessary. Good job on all of it!
| 11am chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
Wow! That was so cute. _
| Jemi Rose chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
Love this very much, I've noted a few mistakes in either your grammar or misthoughts or to say some words are missing from some sentences. Also, that I have to say, very good job with continuing one of the episodes from the anime show into fic-writing. (The way you wrote was something that I had wished that would have happened in that episode, but it never did :( ) Very good job and keep writing this fics of yours in the distant future.
| And FOREVER chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
Awesome story! I've only seen a few episodes of s-CRY-ed, but of the few episodes I've seen Ryuho and Mimori have been my fav couple. I soo glad that this is the couple in your story.
This was a great chapter! You should definitely continue this story!
| Tiger chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
Thanks for writing a Scryed story, especially a Ryuhou / Mimori one. One thing I noticed is that Ryuhou's last name is Tairen. I think it is mentioned in the episode where they show how Ryuhou and Mimori met as children. His father's name was Ryu. In fact, Ryuhou means "son of Ryu."
| Ranoe chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
aw that was so adorable am gonna cry...oh my goodness that was such a good one-shot!
| MiraResQNU chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
M... *big sated sigh* that was so awesome! What an amazing peek into the minds of a moment that all of the fans remember. And then to expound upon it with such a delicious addition (luvved the kiss!) it was just fab! Excellent use of description and imagery- it was like that moment in the cliffs was captured in a vivid painting- and the high emotion made me want to race to the end and yet pause to savor it at the same time. Kudos my dear, it's wonderful! More s-CRY-ed from you! I demand it! (do I still have any pull with your muse?)
Luv, Mira _
ps- thanks for the nod in your intro- I got all blushy! And I found the story reference- you made it sound even better than I remember!
| GoldAngel2 chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
Another universe to be touched by your expert hand-and your knack for breathtaking romance is as formidable as ever. . .
I LOVED s-Cry-ed-the complex characters and storyline captivated me from day one-and I had played with an idea for a post series Ryuho/Minori story but now I can relax and read yours. . .
I loved this episode-when his hand squeezed hers and he said she mattered a great deal to him I loved it-and when he got jealous of Kazuma when he tried to join HOLY to infiltrate the organization-I just knew he was smitten. He was always thinking about her.
Another winner from you, Melissa-and another reason to look forward to updates...
BTW I just updated "Portrait in Blue"-it's going to get very dark and heartbreaking in the next two chapters-and thanks for the review for "Darkest Hour"
| Dwellin chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
You did it! And here it is!
Let me be the first to say, "This is a good read!"
Couldn't wait to get it beta read! For Shame *grin* but I can see why! This is good and I can't wait to read the rest.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Peers around, wherever is that strange noise coming from?