Reviews for This Beautiful Place
FoxFlame2014 chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
Buckets of tears good but depressing
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2014
Who the HELL writes a story like this! Good just write a HAPPIER story:'D
WeirdGirl369 chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
This is good I liked the ending and the note seemed like something Kyo would write.
LonelyNightz chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
omg that was beautiful! loved it!
ShadowQueen1996 chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
fuuuuck...i cried

i have to stop reading agsty stories

good job )
DarkCherokeeSwordsWoman chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Damn it. That is not even right. I loved the story but it made me sit in front of my computer bawling. My little sister came over and asked me what was wrong and I started bawling harder. Seriously loved it though.
x chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
Huwaaaa...
xinqian chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
dammit you got me... i cried :P
Lazy Gaga chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
GAHH! ya made me cry! i tried so hard not to, but i couldnt help it! good job!
Chaseha-Wing chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Nice work, and that is too sad...so let me cheer it up a little.

*Mean while in heaven*

Kyo: U IDIOT! *starts pounding Haru around* I FINALLY GOT SOME FRICKEN PEACE AND NOW UR HERE! I'M GONNA KILL U!

Haru: But I love u. *gets smacked again.*

Kyo: U are about to feel how much I fricken, love u too... the Kagura way.

Haru: OW GOD NO! Ow, oo, my SPLEAN! OWY! OOF OW! MY BLOOD, PLEASE PUT THAT BACK IN MY BODY! OW~

lol, I hope that cheered someone up.
ShadowWolfDagger chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
Awesome story, very sad, but still totally awesome. I actually did tear up.

~Tala~
InsaneChickOfWriting chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
That was so sad! I'm crying. Jeez...And I say a bunch a crap about how I'm not some sappy perso...So much for that idea...But really it was good, it was bittersweet.
Faellyn chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
This is probably the most beautiful story I've ever read. I rarely cry because of a story, but I actually shed a tear for this one.

Keep writing more wonderful fanfiction!
Secluded Angel 33 chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
wow this was really well written.

when I was reading the note part my heart was beating so fast and I felt like I was going to cry. it felt so real that I had to take a few minutes to calm down or I would cry my eyes out.

that being said it was extremely well written and I think you could be an awesome author one day :D
MysticSorceror chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Things I liked:

I like how it started off - poor Kyo

Poor Haru, I just want to hug him

Cute interactions

Good use of emotion

Good characterisation in the note

Sad end

Ways to improve:

Some spelling errors

~Myst

Things that I didn't like:

Weird problem with spacing

It seems a bit over dramatic
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