|Reviews for When It All Falls Apart|
| channnii1234 chapter 20 . 4/26/2014
Please tell you would finish the story as I know that it can't end like that xxx
| tauridowning chapter 19 . 4/21/2012
I really hope you come back to this and finish it!
| Cheery Tropay Venturi chapter 20 . 4/7/2011
I loved it I hope there's more bake scenes comin up
| Cheery Tropay Venturi chapter 19 . 3/20/2011
Love the story I hope u finish it
| CaseyJr chapter 19 . 2/17/2011
Love this story as well!You added all of them perfectly and Nathan and Brooke as twins is so sweet. Would love to see some more Dan and Brooke arguments since he seems to be very overprotective...I am waiting for an update!
| Cribellate chapter 18 . 6/25/2009
This story is awesome :D
| PrettyGirlRocks chapter 6 . 10/2/2008
ok when you say brooke kissed jake and hugged him and he did the same...do you mean little pecks on the lips?please say yes...lol..great update omgsh i wonder where naley are! update soon and God Bless! alithompson
| PrettyGirlRocks chapter 5 . 10/2/2008
ok i guess it is time to leave a review! lol...ok i feel really bad. usually i leave a review of each chapter but lately i have being so lazy when is comes to reviews and i kno it is going to come back and bite me in the but...u kno karma and all...but hopefully not.
i just wanted to let you know that i love ur story and i love the closeness of brathan since i am a big brathan fan...i wish they could be together but i know since they are siblings u probably won't put them together...even though i did...ok moving on lol
brucas is great! i am a big brucas fan and i love how nathan is soo protective brooke and doesn't want her with luke. and omgsh peyton is a total you know what in this story! lol...i don't care much for peyton on the show anyway so i am cool but i know once she lets down her walls her and brooke will be the best of friends...i hope she ends up with jake. and the naley is cute as well even though i am more of a brathan fan...naley is sort of cliche in an un-cliche kind of way...lol...great story though and looking forward to reading more!
| Darkangel22192 chapter 18 . 6/27/2008
I absolutely love it! hope there are some Brucas in the next chapter. update soon!
| tanya2byour21 chapter 18 . 4/29/2008
Yay Jake is out of jail. I am so loving this story. Keep up the great writing and please post more when you can.
| BRUCAS EQUALS LOVE chapter 18 . 4/29/2008
oh my gosh YES jake is out of prisonn! ah that is soo awesome! i cant wait for the next chapter so please update soon...i hope brucass works things out! : D
| LaFilmeMichelle chapter 18 . 4/29/2008
yay! he's outta the jumpsuit! :)
| S05Y31 chapter 18 . 4/29/2008
I am so glad that Jake is out of jail. Update soon please, I cant wait to see more Brucas.
| BRUCAS EQUALS LOVE chapter 17 . 3/13/2008
please udpate son! : D
| TypoKween chapter 17 . 3/9/2008
how the hell could i have missed so many updates? i could have sworn i had this on alert! stupid website! anyways, i'm glad nathan is finally home and on the way to mending the family. brooke and nathan seem to be on good terms and i love that cuz i love them. i still for some odd reason dont really care for haley in this fic but thats beside the point because i love this fic regardless. nathan seems heartbroken but hello nate? you broke up with her so paybacks a biatch. i cant believe nikki id dead tho, thats crazy! poor jake, he's in jail and scared and alone. i wonder what happened cuz he said something was in her leg but then that was it. the flashbacks you did for nikki were incredible and done at all the right times. i seriously think you did an excellent job there. i wonder how brooke and lucas are going to be after this because already brooke seems to be pushing him away. i was surprised she was so nice to peyton tho. everything seems to have fallen apart right now so i hope that now things start to come back together.
until next update! :)