Reviews for Risk
Chanceless chapter 1 . 9/23/2008



I love the intensity of this. The rhythm is incredibly brisk, but it's well suited.


inq101 chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
This reminds me of some of the little songs in Abarat.

Realy nice
Whispering Lillies chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
This is really good! I like poems even though i suck at writing them! LOL _
Jackalobe chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
*dies from the awesomeness of the poem*

That's right, bitch, you are paying for me funeral.

And while I'm still bitter and jealous towards you, I'll plan it all. :) Let's see, the coffin needs to be a beautiful ruby and diamond, rosey pink marble thing. I demand ten thousand roses, blue, white, red, and purple, as well as irises and snapdragons.

There needs to be a banner. "Hail Rosie Real!"

And The Goo Goo Dolls will play in honor of me.

Cilian Murhpey, Brad Pitt, Johnny Depp, and Viggo Mortensen will all cme to pay respects and groan about not realizing that I was the only girl int heir lives.

Roy should be sobbing, realizing he had made the biggest mistake of his life. -

Same with Charlie.

Jeffery was killed already by Cilian Murphey because Jeffery challenged him. -

This should all be in a grassy meadow, at sunset.

Meanwhile Queenie will be in charge of the who is allowed in my awesome funeral. Those who are denied are dropped in an alligator pit.

And you, Sushi, will be the one with the most grief because it was your stupid, god damn talent that drove me to death by jealousy.

. God, you talent whore.

...TRANSLATION FOR THIS ENTIRE RANT: Holy hell this poem is amazingly incharacter and so totally, absolutely, without a doubt awesomely awesome. It rocks. So brilliant. Very good.

Well done!

TopKat chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
wow, very profound and very insightful. it's quite a realistic approach on the real dick grayson.

Violet x3 chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
wow ok 1. that was a great poem .

2. umm I love you .

3. sick nasty poem.

4. I too wonder about Robin . that is a pretty heavy work load he has there.

5. really insightful poem .

I think I've said enough.

keep writing please !

- Vi
Foofynono chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
that was neat
downshift chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
kool! that was AWESOME dude!
Crazy 4 A Reason chapter 1 . 3/28/2006

The Girl Wonder chapter 1 . 3/28/2006 why she can't stay logged in forever!

To the topic at hand... I like poem, makes sence. *kills computer behind self with mallet* okay annoyingness gone. To the topic at hand... vauge but in a good way, I like.

BVP came, read, reviewed and refeused to log in.
allie chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
very nice. this is well written. good job.
S. Vale chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
If I could feel that weight, it would equal maybe like 100 of my backpacks. And let me tell you about what is in my backpack on a normal night:

book sized Premier Agenda book

book sized Latin textbook

Latin Workbook

stack of paper

latin Binder

Algebra binder

Science Binder

Geography binder

Algebra textbook

Science Textbook

At least 3 reading books.

My parents say it's partially my fault, but I have to put off the hw somehow! Some days, there is just no fanfiction to read.

One backpack is enough for me. How does Robin get up?

- Sage