Reviews for Unexpected feelings
geust sorry chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
Not bad, but too fast. the story seems to be going at light speed. also you don't use ! unless someone is talking, pluse seeing this ! or this... gets a little bit annoying. this story dose have promis, keep woking at it and don't give up. sorry for putting geust I have no acceant
Johonna Marie chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
what happens! so tempting, i hate cliff hangers
Opal of Hope chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
It's not bad~ I think it's cute~

Keep Writing~
Random Minion chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
Good, not amazing, but alright. Your promise a fun read, and though you might want to think about slowing down the action, as everything does feel a bit like it's moving at light speed, the story sounds promising. The school setting gives you lots of leeway to get up to all kinds of mischief, and I can’t wait to see what embarrassing scenarios you throw our beloved characters into. I look forward to reading more.
AHealingRenaissance chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
I don't think it's bad at all ;D