Reviews for Pieces on the Ground
michelann chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
That was so like I imagined it. I hope that you take the time to write. I don't know what you do for a living but, I think you could be a writer by trade. Beautiful gift you have.
Goomba chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
Perfect. Sweet, sad and perfect. Thank you.

Cheers Jen
Space rebel chapter 1 . 4/22/2006
Loved your story. Definitely tears forming. I think you've got Kaylee right, I can so see her looking after Wash's dinosaurs and worrying about Serenity and everybody else no matter how hurt she was.
Mya Croft chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
ok i admit it. i cried! wonderfully written. Kaylee keeping the dinosaurs is excactly what i would expect her to do. well done.
Littetat chapter 1 . 4/1/2006
Oh my gosh,I cried. That made me cry. I have never read a fanfic that made me cry. For a short fic, that was powerful.

Don't know if you plan too but maybe you can keep this going? Would like to read more about this.

Nice job. Keep writing.

angeloneous chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
That was an excellent beginning ) If you have it in you, I would love for this to keep going. It is just perfect - the emotions and the characterizations. Beautiful!